Chapter 3: Page 126
Added 2018-03-11 06:05:32 +0000 UTCI was not expecting to get this page done as well tonight!! Surprise~
Also, I want to say that ive spent a lot of time in this comic trying to portray Drew's thoughts through his facial expressions alone. Mostly because I believe its a very strong way to show his depression. A large side effect of being depressed is not having a lot to say, or feeling like you cant speak up and say it, and I 100% feel like those feelings translate over into your own brain as well. I mean... whether you have ever been diagnosed with depression or not, I think most of us have felt a time in our lives where even our own thoughts don't feel relevant or important. And they become quiet in our own heads. This is a part of Drew he struggles with so much. How can he make important decisions if his thoughts wont even speak up??
So on a page like this, when Drew does let his thoughts sound loud and clear-- it is kind of is important to me!
I really want to do a good job of showing depression in this comic without glorifying it or shoving it down your throats (that's something I often hate about this subject in stories). I hope it working! I hope youre loving it
<3 Next page we do get to see what Luca is up to!
Comments
Awwwe. This actually made me tear up a bit. I know how he feels... 😕
Lee-Loo
2018-03-12 22:06:15 +0000 UTCawww Drew, needing something/someone to live for and love...and not knowing quite what or who...yet...soon!
Keru
2018-03-12 17:59:12 +0000 UTCLove that last panel. Drew is beautiful. Hope he asks for help before it gets too much.
Sharon Stogner
2018-03-11 14:29:18 +0000 UTCI really like how you're portraying Drew's depression. Like, it's something he has, but it's not being shoved in your face like it's the only thing about him - if that makes sense. And the snow is so pretty!
Tee
2018-03-11 10:29:35 +0000 UTCOn an entirely separate note, someone needs to show Drew bubble baths and hot chocolate. C:
flower
2018-03-11 06:12:13 +0000 UTCRead the snow and see the dancing pictures, Drew. X3 But in all seriousness, Drew just needs to relax and find out if the alien has trashed his little coffee shop or not. *shrugs* Is that really too much to ask?
flower
2018-03-11 06:10:54 +0000 UTCMy son.
AzrielEver
2018-03-11 06:07:00 +0000 UTC
