HITWOMAN.EP4-1~4-6一些小修改
Added 2025-04-21 12:38:16 +0000 UTC1.刪除男主體内父母幽魂的設定。
這種設定過於魔幻。而且很難編
2.男主KYO的體内是惡念
并非雙重人格，而是原本被壓抑著的變態性格。在母親和姐姐面前他會裝作很乖巧。
是復仇之心讓他暴露出了本性。
3.這個黑色皮衣女人以後作爲 敵方小boss登場
4.戰鬥期間 ，姐姐的身體未消失
-整理的PDF文件-
Comments
笔误，姐弟俩
molingEX
2025-04-25 18:59:56 +0000 UTC原来是这样，姐妹俩也算是有“后台”啦~
molingEX
2025-04-22 20:22:56 +0000 UTC构思是不变的。都是被人帶走，只不過之前那種突然消失 有點 讓人摸不着頭腦。 這個世界裏也沒有人會瞬移。
卑鄙的外乡人NU
2025-04-21 23:19:29 +0000 UTC有点好奇，关于姐姐身体消失这一点，作者原本是怎样构思的
molingEX
2025-04-21 16:42:09 +0000 UTCThe changes I think were fantastic! I much prefer the sisters body being there as opposed to her just disappearing! Great work!
mizzjix
2025-04-21 14:30:11 +0000 UTCOOH! Thanks a heap! The sister is still present! I wondered what you were doing with that plot line! Thanks a heap!
mizzjix
2025-04-21 14:20:07 +0000 UTC姐姐的身體。。
卑鄙的外乡人NU
2025-04-21 13:06:07 +0000 UTCHinako is such an awesome character, that first title page illustration is simply perfect.
Wanax
2025-04-21 12:58:38 +0000 UTC姐姐怎么成尸体了？
地瓜
2025-04-21 12:57:50 +0000 UTC
