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Ozara Poll: New or Old

Added 2024-05-26 13:59:01 +0000 UTC

Okay a few things. No, if her new story is chosen this is not the final prologue. I just thought it would be really crazy to devote so much time to perfecting a new prologue that has a good chance of not being picked. So, this is a rough version, me placing the bare foundations so that you can at least get an understanding of how things will change. A skeleton. As I don't know where I would actually want it to end (part of me wants to end it with Phoenix actually in Tishfai)

If pictures don't work, it'll be fine. This is literally a temporary site just for Ozara's new stuff. I don't care about anything but the text actually appearing.

So what changed as a basic summary:

Ozara and Phoenix are engaged from the beginning.
Phoenix's parents are in their life from the get-go. As well as Phoenix knowing about the curse.
There is a journey like the others but it is not like the others with the idea of "we have to return Phoenix." Here the journey is mostly surrounding the "I have a chance to live" which will be a bigger deal. And literally as I'm writing this I'm realizing that's one of the things I need to spotlight more.
The antagonist is more Fennore and will be the last remaining Great Stag survivor as a secondary antagonist (like how Ruben is featured in Nour's story or Raznith in Ruben's)