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WiH: Chapter 25 — The Rating Game

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"Always wondered why people don't use their strongest attack first" - Sans. Not Zyras's strongest attack, but you get what I am saying, maybe he could have gotten a few of them there.

Jajasx222

Why would he pay him? Mephisto is doing it as a fuck you u don't steal from me, but if he losses here he is not the kind to escalate. The only way I can see Zyras paying reparations is if he needs to smooth things over, and right now he does not.

Jajasx222

That's what happens when you try to sneak on fucking Scathach lol.

Jajasx222

Thanks!

Jajasx222

The man is a laughing stock, he sent Tsufaame to beat a child and now he is fighting for his Pillar seat, how did he get there? lol

Jajasx222

That would be incredibly boring to read and to write. Zyras is a Satan class devil (And not a normal one; he is an archmage with a lot of skills). He can take a few Ultimate-class classes at the same time. The only way I can see him losing to someone less powerful than him is A: outskills him (Rare, most people more skilled than him are older and more powerful) B: surprises him (This I could see, there are people with freaky abilities out there) or C: A few of them work in tandem perfectly to take him down.

Jajasx222

Thanks! I will change it soon.

Jajasx222

Damn why you gotta end it there?? I would have preferred waiting an extra week or two and get the whole game in one go over having it split up like this. T.T

Enthessi

Corrections- windows melted into glass. The shockwave from Zyras’s spell had left its mark even here. This part to me at least doesnt make sense since windows are already made of glass. Or at least she should ley her join in! But nooo, she was the first in the peerage so she would be the first everywhere. Should say she should let her join in not ley her join in. Meredith nodded quickly. “Got it.” Her breathing steadied, her grip tightening on her spear. Shouldnt meredith be useing a sword?

travis btmb

I like how youre staying consistent with the power scaling and didn’t suddenly make him struggle against an ultimate class to artificially „raise the stakes“ or some bs like that.

Jaeven

Fantastic but you’re gonna edge me to death at this rate

Von Mehz

Seconded

Orchamus

Excellent job so far, very organic fights. Kinda hilarious that no one on Team Hirulivh respects him ngl

Orchamus

AMAZING fights so far! Absolutely love it! Love how Meredith and Valerie are proving themselves here, heh. Poor Pawn who got taken out like a shmuck by Scathach in an instant though. 🤣

Deathknight134

Corrections; "once the queen Mephisto Pheles himself" --> "once the queen of Mephisto Pheles himself" "few ultimate class ones" --> "few Ultimate-class ones" "The real battle was about to begin. Meredith could tell the truth; she was nervous." ^ Gonna be honest, this confused me at first. There was no linebreak to indicate a clear change of pov and scene. I thought it was still Serafall or Saphyra. "she should ley her join in" --< "she should let her join in" "phase though objects" --> "phase through objects" "then kicks his head" --> "then kicked his head" "man falls unconscious" --> "man fell unconscious" "Bishop retired" Uhh, aren't you also supposed to announced who's piece it belonged to? Like 'Hiruch's Bishop retired' / 'A Bishop of Hiruch has been retired" ?? I can buy not happening for the other pieces since Zyras only has two Bishops and a Queen, but the Bishop being retired should be made more clear, no? "only reason I could phantom why" --> "only reason I could fathom why"

Deathknight134

WOO LETS GOOO. Please don't keep us waiting long.

dragonkw213 .

I hope mc will not need to pay Mephisto, even if he stole books, the bet between mc and his sperms donor is too heavy, and with Mephisto and others lending him peerage, they may have screwed mcs and his peerage life, if not for himself there is Valerie, his mother and others mc has to think of who could suffer because of this lend strength.

Nisiris

LETS GOOOO Zyras: To survive a nuclear bomb, I had to become nuclear myself! Nuclear fire off rip is crazy. ...but I'm not mad at it.

ytm


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