Miia mom as FM|RE | Piece 5 March 2019 | Finished Piece | Preview 3
Added 2019-04-09 06:43:22 +0000 UTC"Magazine Page 2" . I hope you like this format of variants, if you enjoy it please don't forget to give your opinion in the comments, otherwise I'll consider that this efforts it's not worthy. My big thanks to Patron Erien in helping me with this article.
Write the articles this time was only a test, I just had the idea and decided to do, maybe, need to be improved but I need to know what you guys think. If approved, maybe I can even try to translate it for another 2 languages. It's just a thought.
Comments
Actually not, I'm not sure if Erien it is native but, I'm almost sure that the bad parts are my fault xD If these variants keeps regular, I'll let an opened file here for each article so Patrons can check about this grammar stuff.
Krabby
2019-04-09 17:07:30 +0000 UTCI'm trying to not be too negative, but some of the sentences are pretty bad grammar-wise...The art is great so I think the article needs to be written a bit better. Do you have a native English speaker to proof-read these?
Dan
2019-04-09 16:33:43 +0000 UTCI certainly don't mind the extra effort. It fits well with the magazine theme you have been using for these monthly pictures.
BigCheese
2019-04-09 07:17:44 +0000 UTC
