Hell world comic continued?
Added 2023-04-16 08:00:02 +0000 UTCMember Dennis van B asked about the storyline continuing with the adventures of Tania. So what do you think? It was one of my very, very early comics which didn't seem to gather much interest. Links to view them are below.
Let me know your thoughts? Do you want the comic to continue? Feel free to leave a comment.
Hell World Issue 1: https://www.patreon.com/posts/18676386
Hell World Issue 2: https://www.patreon.com/posts/18676456
Regards always Lee
Comments
Good Morning BS: I am giving a VERY tentative "yes" vote on your comic.... I mean no disrespect but your comic contains all the usual VERY desirable elements. Women and beautiful and well proportioned Pregnancy Mind Control Birth But your comic ALSO contains the usual (for me) UN desirable -Cold metal Cyborg Monstrosity - Grotesque (all male) alien "Kree-Rang" that have no lips just fangs - Obligatory escape at the end.... -Alien seed did not COMBINE DNA in the offspring for a Hybrid, but just photocopied itself Now, I really think you have an OPPORTUNITY here, to make a comic that combines a LOT of your sex (fap) With an actual pioneering plot! #1. I LOVED that you (Correctly) pointed out in issue #1 that a CYBORG had a HUMAN brain... Would have been nice to see the Cybory want to breed with her, to create a stylized HUMAN like body where it could experience the physical pleasure of sex, by using her (male) child as "parts" to get out of the cold hard iron, and build himself a new (advanced) body to transfer his brain into (and see him ACCOMPLISH that goal!) I know we have talked many time about how 100% of your comics portray the IDEAL woman, but I have yet to see you portray a single male as body perfect as the women (and I am not talking always human. (See next comment) #2. Why are you so resistive to making the Mal alien more...aesthetically pleasing... Have lips for kissing, have some kind of physically pleasing skin, fur or hide? I mean the alien could have been a Lion man (like Cat Ra has feline characteristics) Maybe Something Faun like? (Think Pan) #3. I LOVED the ending where the 2 women get Lesbian.... but does it have to be they got away? Couldn't they find comfort in each other's arm, while forced to submit to their male masters (and repopulate the earth with Cyborgs? I mean....this seems like a perfect set up to explore my idea of an antagonist (Villain) who goes deeper then sex, and for just once, NOT have the human ALWAYS (ultimately) win... A great plot to me would be the Cyborg male (as I described above) making new bodies for the women's offspring that would be capable of repelling (and enslaving) the Alien's on the planet? but the women themselves are defeated and kept as slaves? And why are none of the Alien's female? Just food for though,,,
Lordgriffin
2023-04-16 11:39:32 +0000 UTC