Sapphire - Warrior Woman - Issue 6 - Part 1

Ok. I like to give you feed back. Keeping in mind for everyone who views my comments, the audience I think you are targeting.... these are, of course, my personal opinion of what woudl make it better for ME ... It doesn't mean anything you did was bad. Ok a BIG #1. I DO like how you portray Sapphire .... Is she REALLY too fact because she has given BIRTH a few times? I LOVE the sentiment but she JUST said she Miscarried (not sure why you needed her to do that but ... ok) so...HAS she had someone else's brat? if so how is that child coming along? even if it is not adult you could show them playing and exhibiting special powers or whatever... The only think *I* really worry about is Sapphire's current state of mind will be Temporary... I woudl SUGGEST if you want to return her to Crime Fighting (ever) you keep her a a slave to them and just give her instructions to "act normal" That way she can go on adventures even get raped but we all know she is not REALLY free. Ok, after an "atta boy" I like to complain a bit.... that being (for me) Too much too fast,,,, The whole Racial thing and descriptors such as "slorp" is more amusing (again to ME) then arousing, (instead of Slorp *I* woudl like to see her wince and whimper as her anus is invaded) If you are going to include the racial part why not ADD to the reasoning that "bitch soon YOUR powers will be part of our Black Movement instead of you white bitches" Let us see the reason they want her is for REAL conquest not just a superficial black vs white thing Next I really LOVE the whole streaming thing, and personally feel it is REALLY realistic. I mean sure a lot of people SAY they are against rape and FOR good winning, but with action like that....and complete anonymity, I'd like to see even a few HEROS (male) paying to stream and watch... I have to wonder how this would look if instead of a Cheap Porn stream they were going after an actual sophisticated calculated enslavement

Lordgriffin