Huger game p29
Added 2017-02-07 17:59:54 +0000 UTC
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Thank you so much. I fixed it as you said. At first, I thought about She was in the process of having conversation but didn't know how to write the sentence. TwT
EscapefromExpansion
2017-02-08 08:07:38 +0000 UTCYou might want "the last thing I remember is I *was having* a conversation with". "the last thing I remember is I have a conversation with" /is/ correct, but in this context it would mean that she has a *planned* conversation with Lyon, not she was in the process of having a conversation. (E.g. she has (or have for first person) a thing to do).
Fake Name
2017-02-08 03:06:51 +0000 UTCWell I didn't except Sherria or Chelia (Her name in the dub) to appear in the comic XD
Dracoknight545
2017-02-07 19:36:40 +0000 UTCYou are a Jedi. >.
EscapefromExpansion
2017-02-07 18:07:13 +0000 UTCI'm guessing that Sherria will growing up as well right?
Dracoknight545
2017-02-07 18:01:13 +0000 UTC
