Huger Game p44
Added 2017-06-20 20:02:56 +0000 UTC
Comments
thank you so much james. I fixed them as you said. >.
EscapefromExpansion
2017-06-21 15:39:09 +0000 UTCInteresting development. Minor dialog and punctuation. *Sigh*, "Can you hear me?", 'questions', "I couldn't fight back.", My, my! What have we here?", "Surprised, huh?"
James
2017-06-21 10:11:38 +0000 UTCo.o Two Brandish, but which one is the real one then? and also yeah for more curvy Cana
Dracoknight545
2017-06-20 23:15:30 +0000 UTCnext page will clearify more. I'm speeding up to complete it soon.
EscapefromExpansion
2017-06-20 21:17:46 +0000 UTCHm hm hm what's going on here. Imitatia or something?
BioYuGi
2017-06-20 21:06:26 +0000 UTC
