Some small edits. Panel 1 "She must know the victim." Panel 3 "Just come down here now. We need to ask you some questions." Last panel "You interrogate her. I'll check the backstage area." "Uhh... Okay, I'll question her. Be careful."
James
2021-09-30 11:13:05 +0000 UTC
thank you so much. I appreciate the fix. XD
EscapefromExpansion
2021-09-30 05:34:48 +0000 UTC
Nice one. Only edit to make is a missing word in the text for Deku in panel 4, "Are you sure we've got to do this now? In the middle of the show?"