HA Noire p13
Added 2021-10-30 17:56:34 +0000 UTC
Comments
thank you so much.
EscapefromExpansion
2021-10-31 02:02:56 +0000 UTCthank you so much.
EscapefromExpansion
2021-10-31 02:02:47 +0000 UTCComic looks great. Small dialog change. "Why didn't you show him your badge?"
James
2021-10-30 22:20:08 +0000 UTCText here is mostly fine, but in the first panel the question should be, "Why didn't you show him your badge?"
CrowMagnon
2021-10-30 19:45:49 +0000 UTC
