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Status Update And November Hiatus

I started work on Power Vacuum about eighteen months ago. My elevator pitch at the time was to make a sitcom version of the typical "house" style visual novel. I figured a tightly written comedy VN would be well received; as well as the perfect job for me to do in-between weekend gigs. The reception to the first three versions of my game were lukewarm. People enjoyed the characters and humor but were rightly critical of my erotic content. So, I started putting more time into learning how to make my erotic content better. I'm sure those of you who have made use of the gallery feature have noticed the difference in quality from the early chapters. But this increase in quality has started to take a toll. Animations, collision, dforce, water physics, lighting, geometry shells, natural looking clothing, and expressions have piled up. And when it comes to getting things exactly as you want them, DAZ Studio is a clunky piece of software. Coupled with the iray render engine being slow even on 2000 series GPUs; experimentation has been a time consuming endeavor that has specifically been eating into my writing time. I've tried to squeeze in as much writing as possible, but comedy is difficult and I have to be in the right mindset. I ended up having to force it with deadlines; resulting in writing that I'm unhappy with. Now, all of the blame can't be attributed to my stringent writing schedule. Part of the issue is that it's hard to write a comedy game during the bleakest year of my life. I'm sure many of you can empathize. I know depressed VN artist is a worrying cliché, so I will state that I'm not mentally at risk. It's just been an understandably awful year.  


The reason why I bring this up is because as we approach the home stretch to version seven, I've decided to postpone the update and take November off to rewrite most of the scenes, redo renders, and get out of my head for a while. Before anyone can say the word "milking", I'll be pausing my Patreon for November since this is a borderline vanity move as I'm sure a fair amount of you don't care if my writing is up to my own personal standard. The update was originally scheduled for around the 8th-13th of November. The new date will be the same but in December. I know this is a disappointing announcement, just know that I'm not happy about it either. Again, Patreon will be free next month if you're already subscribed and today's game teasers will be posted tomorrow. 


Moving forward, I've been trying to think of ways to make sure this doesn't happen again. Taking a month off for my mental health is a start as it also gets me one month closer to the long promised return to normalcy. Secondly, I've decided to invest in a new workstation PC with two RTX 3090s. It should be up and running around November 10th. It'll be four times as fast as my current PC and will significantly speed up my workflow. Other than that, I'm out of ideas. The game already dominates all of my time since the work is never done and everything can be improved. When I look at the shortcuts that other visual novels take, I don't see any that I want to copy. However, the main thing that I've noticed time and again is that the majority of VN players are completely satisfied with pedestrian dialogue. An adult visual novel written like a sitcom was an interesting concept, but I think this is the wrong medium. Most people don't look at these games as adult visual novels. They look at them as porn games. And porn games don't need wordplay, characterization, or proper use of any literary device.   


Part of the problem could be that a considerable amount of people that play VNs aren't from the USA and presumably know English as a second language. Comedy is the hardest thing to translate and there's just no way the numerous people messaging me things like "Why Hunter no sex lady?" are going to appreciate the joke I'm writing about a commercial from forty years ago. So, again, for my edification, I've included a poll asking your opinion on my writing. I have no plans to change how Power Vacuum is written but the results will influence any future games I may make.  


I'll appreciate any ideas you may want to offer in the comments. 

Thanks for supporting Power Vacuum, sorry about the delay, and Happy Halloween.

Comments

I just recently found Power Vacuum while wanking about on the web and pretty much loved it straight off. So much so that I rushed through it in a few days and just subscribed to this page. The models and rendering (Ophelia in particular) were enough to keep my erotic desires fulfilled (even clothed) but it was in fact the story that really pulled me in. The premise is obviously sort of silly (which I personally am more than OK with), but the dialogue, character development, and particularly the ways that you have slowly evolved their sexual relationships has been very interesting to watch and read through. I enjoyed how they talk themselves into/out of sexual scenarios, justify sexual/semi sexual behavior, and there is even a legitimate two steps forward and one step back approach with the female relationships in and out of the house. The dynamic makes the story surprisingly relatable in those ways. The only reason I'm even responding to this is also because of what you posted above, halting work while halting payment of your Patrons shows substantial character, and your integrity to what you wanted accomplish with your Adult visual novel is refreshing and impressive, adult content or not. I think there is potentially a lot more room for this type of thing. I'm even going to turn a female friend of mine onto this (she reads lots of erotica) to see what she thinks. I personally am less picky about the fully animated portions (not that I don't appreciate good animation), but I was surprised how good your animation is considering the attention to the models, renders and story. So why am I writing a novel length post? I'm just really compelled to say how much I appreciate this work. I don't understand much in the way of graphic design but I have a lot of writing experience. Writing something like this takes a lots of energy and even more time, which is only expounded by the rendering process! So thank you and I wish you well! One thousand blessings upon your penis good sir! And P.S.: the end of Ophelia's ch.6 bedtime scene: my God man. **SPOILER ALERT** I very much appreciate the fact that after all this time, they still have not bung! (Or banged) It's SO hot! Which is a big thing that I like about what you've done, the amount of maddeningly ALMOST sex! God's work! God's work my friend!

iPhantom!

I need to say, I originally started with this to fulfill my perverse needs. But the writing and characters kept me coming back. I fell in love with all of them and their quirky, silly, ridiculous interactions. Except hunter. I hate him. But in a good way. Keep the funny. Now it is more of a comedy game/novel with the bonus of ass, titties and sex. Keep up the good work and enjoy your time off. Wish I could donate more.

Eric Warchol

I know I’m late but just wanted to say I love the writing and it’s the reason I stuck with the game in it’s early less aesthetically pleasing chapters. In the latest chapters the erotic scenes and animations are finally worthy of the great writing you’ve done on this project so I hope you’ll keep the comedy sitcom aspect going forward.

Jess_2037

It's almost 50/50 for me to be honest because i both love the sex scenes and i love your style of comedy. I always personally hated the NTR stuff but you know you can make some funny stuff when one of the things i look forward to is the NTR non-canon bad ends, just because they crack me up every time.

SubNero

Enjoy your break! Looking forward to when you get back.

Kerr Wm

Wow, thank you for the reassurance! I couldn't possibly get back to all of you without repeating myself so let me just say the kind words are very much appreciated!

Jerry Smithy

The artwork is great, but the story is INSANELY GREAT. Please don't change it.

jpostel

I'll add to the chorus of other Patreons that the writing of this game is, by far, the thing that stands out and elevates this story to the top tier of those available now. I subscribed to this game, as with so many others, because the dialogue is so hilariously funny. From the "lurching" comment very early on in the banter between Brenna and the MC to any number of other comments later, the interactions between the characters is, hands down, the crowning achievement with the entire game so far. Don't get me wrong, I love the sexy models and the ero-content, but the writing is what stands out. When a 'fap game' becomes something that can engross me in a story to the point where fapping is second to what the characters are saying, that's a testiment to how well it's crafted. I absolutely know this cannot be easy to write; I am from the US and a 40-something, so the jokes about old sit-coms and things make me laugh all the time, so I would encourage you to keep up the writing if at all possible. I also know that comedy writing is very much a mind-set so would honestly prefer slower releases if that's what it took to keep you in a better mental state and not feel rushed. i say take the time you need, just that i hope you keep your enthuiasm going, even if slower. I'd prefer a slower released game, than one where the author feels pressured to the point it's abandoned. We'll be here, you take the time you need and give yourself a break, even the best comedians have to try a dozen jokes to get a few that stand out, so you won't strike gold every time, it's the effort that counts. :) Comedy, like medicine, is a 'practicing' type thing, and the more it's done the better chance of success there will be but it still may not always be easy, and it won't always be perfect so if that's understood by all involved, hopefully, there will be less pressure overall. :)

JD2.0

Alright, listen up, dummy. Outside of Psychodelusional's batshit absurdist take on the genre, you've managed to make the most consistently funny adult game going, with a level of craftsmanship in its writing that is wholly unique. I know you know this, but nobody writes jokes like this in adult games. Someone, somewhere else mentioned the banter being like Sorkin, and at least once per update, usually between either Ooph-MC or Bren-MC, that's exactly what it's like - some perverted mishmash of rapid fire Sorkin dialog peppered with Zucker pratfalls wrapped in a Larry David circular narrative. You do good work. You know this and don't need a poll to confirm it for you. What you do need is to use this game as a learning experience. We can see you experimenting with various tools and techniques as its gone along. I know it winds up being a huge time sink but it'll be worth it for your next game. Look at where Philly started out to the slick stuff he's producing now. He had the same issues that drive you crazy right now - a game that definitely stuck out but didn't rake in the dollars you'd expect. Hard work, honing your craft and ,eh, slightly more careful planning at the beginning stages will eventually ensure a financially rewarding adult game developer experience. If you stick with PV for another year, it'll come. If you finish off PV and move on to a new game, it'll come as well, and possibly blow up if you pick the right genre/setting/story. One word of caution - I understand the Daz fatigue. I understand the lure of other 3d software. But the female figures are the heart, soul and wallet of adult games and there is nobody, nowhere, no how with so many shaders and easy morphs that you can put on a 3d figure as Daz's genesis figures. One look at the skin on any human figure in Blender should scare anyone straight unless they really, really understand the Blender shader node editor. You can use any number of other software packages to do what you need (fluid, physics, etc) and import the results as obj. I'd just warn against taking any leaps without knowing what you're jumping over. Anyway, good luck. Have yourself a vacation and enjoy the threat of a global pandemic unencumbered by clipping and Daz crashes.

Joe Pressa

Like Everyone above me has said, take a break and don't stress about time. While I can't speak for everyone I do feel confident in saying that due to the quality work that is Power Vacuum, we'll be here when you get back

Lockwood

Nooo please take a break but keep your writing style and such. The lines for not peeping in bathroom 1st time is what had me sold on the game

Take your time dude, I'll gladly wait for my man Hunter to get his action

Take the time you need to recover. It doesn't do any good if your work has to suffer from it, then we'll wait a little longer, that won't kill anyone ^^. To your game, I love it! The models look great, the erotic content is ... WOW, and as far as the story goes, it just fits together perfectly. It's nice to have a game like this in which the story about the characters doesn't take itself seriously. I had to smile a lot and it's also very exciting to read. I am not from the USA, but I still understand everything very well, and the wit and humor are easy to understand. I'm very curious to see what happens next, what will Hunter come up with next, what has really happened in Mallory's past, how long can Brenna resist, etc. With this in mind, get well soon and see you soon ^^

Bio

For myself, the comedy is a big factor in my enjoyment of the game. Normally Brenna's body type wouldn't really be my thing, yet she is my favourite character in this game. The reason being the humour that laces her conversations and interactions with Sterling. To many of these games have a quasi soap opera feel to them. They try to take seriously what are inherently absurd situations. The comedy in this game and the fact it doesn't take itself to seriously is, for me, a big part of its charm.

Dasati

So, for me Comedy is what sets this Game apart from competitors. While the Image Quality is another thing I definitely care about, writing is also important. There are a few Games where I didn't even bother trying after reading the poorly written synopsis and looking at example scenes. Your Game has good presentation and good writing and it makes it stand out. While I might not appreciate all the jokes you make because I'm not from the US and thus wouldn't know any old commercials I at least used to live in the US and get some cultural references. The most important thing is though that you should write what you yourself enjoy. Don't force yourself to dumb down your writing if you wouldn't enjoy doing it. There are People that enjoy all manner of things and if you lose some People by going comedy you will lose others by going dumb.

Der Polygonianer

I started playing this game cause the models looked amazing and thought it would be amazing fap material. This VN has easily become 1 of my top 3 due to your amazing writing and comedy! You've done an amazing job with this VN never doubt that! Sure you'll get those who'll be like "not enough sex this game is so slow!" But they are the ones who think with their d*** too much and can't appreciate great storytelling. Take as much time as you need mate cause I guarantee that anyone who feels the same as me will be here once you return!

Tony

Hi! I'm just new to the Patreon and the game (I think I only signed up last week, after finishing Ch 6). I would like to emphasize that it was *precisely* the comedy content that made me sign up to the Patreon. While I was playing the game, I found myself laughing constantly at the computer, something that has not happened to me in any of the dozens of VNs I have already played. It was when I realize that I was actually enjoying it beyond the erotic content that I decided this was a game worth contributing to. Irrespective of the poll results, I would like to encourage you to stick with the high-quality comedy content, even if it is at the expense of the erotic one. I think the comedy content is very good, and it is precisely what sets your game apart from every other game out there making it a quite different and unique experience. I believe that if you give up on the high-quality comedy content, then you would just end up with another trite visual novel. So, as one of your newest patreons, I would like to let you know that I decided to contribute to this game *precisely* because of the comedy content, and it would be a shame to lose that and see this game, that made me laugh consistently and repeatedly, become another typical VN. And, of course, I appreciate very much your honesty in taking a break (a well-deserved one, I bet, this is probably the worst year in many people's lives). I will be looking forward for the next chapter! Stay strong! Best,

Came for the porn, stayed for the laugh, that pretty much sums it up. I like your light-hearted approach and hope that it stays this way.

Loopus

Take care of yourself, a break every now and then is important. I also want to say to you that I love the comedy as well as the erotic content and see them as two sides of the same coin, one can not be without the other. I am not a native english speaker and I belive I understand more than enough of the humor to enjoy the characters. I'll be honest that there were only a select few of VNs and games from patreon that I actually read the plot of and even those were starting to bore me with how unimportant it felt at times. But when I found your game I actually felt entertained as well as aroused with the, imo brilliant mix of plot, humor and erotica. The characters are hilarious as well as compelling and I cannot thank you enough for having made this. I truly belive that you have created one of the most allround entertaining games/VNs on patreon.

Mastro91

Take care!

PantsonFire

Mental health is especially important now. Enjoy the break, you’ve earned it.

Kol

Genuine laugh out loud moments are rare in these trying times and your game provides them in spades. Thank you for that.

Kol

The only thing that has made me laugh as much as PV is Monty Python, I'm a tough customer when it comes to comedy, but yours is absolutely brilliant. I didn't expect to find that while playing smut-games. Don't worry about pushing out content your not happy with, everyone that is reasonable understands that some things can't be forced, and as long as your upfront about it you shouldn't feel anyone breathing down your neck. And then there are those that aren't reasonable, that will find a reason to complain, no matter what... and, well, fuck em'. I can't wait to play the new content, but, take your time and release something that you're happy with. All the best, pal.

Lezromancer

Increase minimal pledge to 2$ per month. That will make you feel good.

Take all the time you need man. Good things are worth waiting for.

ace

Dont worry, we love your game if you need to take this month off do it, but I feel that if you should collect the payment because you deserve it

+1

It was the story and comedic moments that drew me to this game and why I support it here. There are hundreds of dross barely translated VNs which are only popular because of the genres it taps into. Honestly I think every update has been better than the one previous and if not for the writing id not give a damn about half the cast - in this VN I'm invested in everyone... Given its NTR it's imperative you care about them. They're likable and have personality not just physical appeal and I would never trade that for saucy content and just another by the numbers VN. Enjoy your rest dude, you've earned it.

Skode

I just climbed on board here last month and became a patreon as soon as i finished the most recent update. Your game is really tremendous and I just wanted to say keep up the good work.

Cronshaw

There are a few great games that I look forward to every time an update comes out and yours is among the very top (with games like The Deluca Family, Being a DIK, and WVM). What sets you apart is your amazing skill at writing the story being told and how you always manage to make me laugh, so I think you should continue the way you have been working and hopefully soon enough, you will be able to hire people to take care of the graphics so you can focus on the story (if not this game, then future ones). Enjoy your break!

XtremeJ

The reason I subscribed is because of your over-the-top comedy writing style. This is what elevates you above being another slow-moving harem porn. Absolutely keep it up! The only thing I would suggest, is that you don't need to throw 4, 5, 6 comic lines at us in rapid succession when 1 or 2 will give the same effect. Not that I don't enjoy them but sometimes less is more.

Kerr Wm

If you'll forgive a food analogy, the porn is the meat, but your comedy is the seasoning that gives it flavor.

Fizbandu

Your game is by far my favorite. It was the first porn VN I ever played and you have set a high bar that I use to compare other to. Keep doing what you're doing and take care of yourself.

Bubbajay187

Never change the way you write, you are hands down the best comedy writer in the porn game genre. When you start second guessing your work you need to take a step back and relax especially with the entertainment you have provided consistently.

Kingkoopa


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