Libby & Holly Pg. 9-10
Added 2023-01-04 04:57:38 +0000 UTCWhoops surprise there's two pages!
Didn't get as far on colors before feeling the need to share it with you all this time. What do you think of of the *asterisk-ish thougth clouds? I kind of like how they stay in the background to the dialog, like thoughts are, but I'm not 100% on the furriness alone, maybe they should have a pale fill color so they pop out a liiiittle more? ๐ค
Happy Tuesday, everyone! ๐
Comments
๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค I'm glad you're into it so far!
Winton Kidd
2023-01-20 18:31:31 +0000 UTCI want to see what happen next ๐ค
Urfavoritepanda
2023-01-20 08:15:48 +0000 UTCThank you Rebecca!!!โฅ๏ธ
Winton Kidd
2023-01-07 16:40:03 +0000 UTCI think the asterisk clouds work well!
Rebecca Brown
2023-01-07 06:14:13 +0000 UTCUh oh!
Rebecca Brown
2023-01-07 06:13:39 +0000 UTCheheeheee ๐ฅฐ I'm trying to expand my capacity for teasing with this work
Winton Kidd
2023-01-06 06:52:37 +0000 UTCTHE โจTEASEโจ
PAN
2023-01-06 06:49:23 +0000 UTCHolly totally gives off that vibe, yes! I thought she's smug because she totally knows what Libby tries to hide under the last book which is why she left it there. Or maybe it's just Libby-scope - wishful thinking (GAY). Sorry, for whatever reason that really sticks with me from the preview pages ๐ซฃ
Fuya
2023-01-05 04:03:57 +0000 UTC๐๐๐๐๐
Winton Kidd
2023-01-05 03:25:00 +0000 UTCMe too honestly. I'm going to have fun with them :))))))
Winton Kidd
2023-01-05 03:24:53 +0000 UTCHappy to supply :)
Winton Kidd
2023-01-05 03:23:54 +0000 UTCHehe I like that you think she looks smug. I think Holly is that effortlessly good student that we all wish we were. ๐ฅบ
Winton Kidd
2023-01-05 03:23:34 +0000 UTC๐๐ป thank you for this high praise! ๐
Winton Kidd
2023-01-05 03:21:31 +0000 UTCAaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiI love it so much
Aristotle Fellatrix
2023-01-04 22:24:04 +0000 UTCOhhh how I can't wait for the next pages ๐
Wuff_Boman
2023-01-04 15:55:31 +0000 UTCI do like surprises ๐like these.
Leonard Vindel
2023-01-04 08:38:38 +0000 UTCHolly looks so smug all the time, I love her. Poor Libby, that kind of panic is among the worst ๐ I think the thought bubbles would benefit from a slightly lighter background color.
Fuya
2023-01-04 08:14:23 +0000 UTCThat expression in the last part is so simple yet full of so many different emotions. You can feel the anxiety, the embarrassment, the slight shame in being caught. Chefs kiss ๐ค๐ฝ
Rico
2023-01-04 06:17:10 +0000 UTCPorcupine bubbles is a way better name. Is that what they're called? I could probably handwrite that text and have it feel appropriate since it's more... Gushy and urgent usually. Maybe I'll give that a try later on and see how it feels. Thank you for the wise suggestion Sam! ๐
Winton Kidd
2023-01-04 05:14:36 +0000 UTCFor the thoughts, maybe change the font a little? I like the porcupine bubbles tho, they're cute
Sam Christopherson
2023-01-04 05:10:26 +0000 UTC
