My Bigger Half sketch page 99
Added 2025-03-29 15:00:15 +0000 UTC
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I'll see what I can do. There is still the remaining bread left to eat. My goal is to intertwine the plot with the belly/weightgain stuff as much as possible so that they happen simultaneously and hopefully keep the pace flowing smoothly (I want to avoid boring lulls of plot as much as I can). I've also been trying to condense these recent scenes to be as concise as possible so that we can actually get to the weight gain sooner. That's when the real story starts. I know what you mean, though. There hasn't been a lot of just straight stuffing/belly stuff. Now that the dynamic of cook and taste tester has finally been established, there will definitely be more of that. Thank you for the feedback. It helps me know how I can improve.
Wishroll
2025-03-30 18:05:26 +0000 UTCholy moly
fa1995
2025-03-29 18:43:37 +0000 UTCEnjoying just how into this she is, and how big she's grown! Though, I do think the comic could dwell on her expanding a little more in these upcoming scenes, as there's been a lot of plot and chatting lately XD Hopefully she still has plenty of room for a mountain of dessert, even if she almost pops!
Skellie
2025-03-29 18:14:02 +0000 UTC
