Upcoming scene: Hyper wears a police uniform
Added 2020-06-24 04:33:29 +0000 UTCAaaaahhhhh crap.
Okay so I looked over my story and notes for Sins and Paradise, and we do in fact have a scene where Hyper wears a police uniform for a disguise. I've taken liberties to discuss with friends about the situation. They all agreed that the context in which everything takes place makes sense.
I don't want anyone to feel offended, or scared off by a scene that is short in the grand scheme of things; HOWEVER, I am open to discuss virtually anything, and hope that I afforded some trust from you all to continue handling the story gracefully.
With that, here's a preview of the image of Hyper wearing the Wonderland prison guard's uniform.
Thank you for the continued support.
Comments
Wolfstar, Just get your story out there. If you have to worry about offending people with your story you probably would not have gotten past the sand worm ("DUNE" readers, watchers) Everything you have written could probably offend someone, ( i probably have just by replying), if they choose to be. That is the world we live on, wish otherwise but its the truth. I'm sure you have this story planned out, and it will probably take a few years to finish. a lot can happen in a couple of years and things could line up wrong. BUT I'm sure your loyal followers and readers like and enjoy what you have accomplished so far (Its awesome). As you said Stay your course, get the story out there, And may you and your characters live long and prosper. (got the Star Trek quote in there so i wouldn't offend trekie's, since i mentioned Star Wars first).
Peterwolf
2020-06-25 00:08:51 +0000 UTCYou are welcome Star. And seriously that is an extra reason your patrons will understand and will love your story too. You care, and that is awesome. I hope i say this for many more patrons too, that will be looking forward for the next part of the story. Until then, please take care man.
Xeralex
2020-06-24 23:29:13 +0000 UTCThanks Xeralex. I'm trying to make sure to put myself in the shoes of our audience, and don't want to turn a blind eye to anything that rightfully deserves to be scrutinized. I also appreciate any feedback you guys have for me.
Wolfstar
2020-06-24 22:29:17 +0000 UTCThanks for your feedback Peterwolf. I will do my best to stay the course. Make sure you call me out if anything starts to suck though x3
Wolfstar
2020-06-24 22:26:11 +0000 UTCI agree with what Peter said. This story has nothing to do with what happens right now in rl, and if people find it offending in any way, it's their loss really. And seriously, you have been working this story for so all this time, you shouldn't even consider change it for something like that. Pls keep up the story and the plans for your updates as you have man. I for one, looking forward for the next part. And seriously, whoever has issue with a small disguise part in the story, then once more i'll say it, their loss -.-.
Xeralex
2020-06-24 10:21:48 +0000 UTCDo what you have to do and how you want to do it. Its a story that your trying to do and you do it how you want to. If anyone feels offended by anything its just too bad. Political and social issues should not even matter. I mean we are talking about a story that deals with the afterlife, Gay, Furry or bestiality, Death and in roundabout way religion. Make believe characters, the list goes on. Last thing you need to do is put in a disclaimer like they did in star wars end credits that the people and places depicted were in no way related to anyone alive etc. etc. Just continue the way you are going, Your story is amazing and I'm sure everyone waits with baited breath for the next installment. I know i do. And hyper does look sexy in that uniform. he he.
Peterwolf
2020-06-24 06:23:32 +0000 UTC
