Interest level for idea
Added 2023-04-24 14:27:15 +0000 UTCSo I truly started my writing adventure with my story, 'My Upgrades are invincible' Due to a number issues like it being my first story and myself having zero idea how to write, it had a great number of issues with the story itself to say nothing of the grammar and other issues. That and for whatever reason a lot of other online novel sites stole the story and reposted it under their name and you can literally buy it in Turkish on Amazon lol
Anyway I was thinking about rewriting it and wanted to get your guys opinion on it as I have grown a lot as a writer since then.
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Yeah it was my first serious fic so it had a lot of issues
Azazyel
2023-04-25 07:37:57 +0000 UTCI actually avoided reading your stories for a good while after giving your first DanMachi story a try since it felt hella rushed.
Zerak
2023-04-24 21:57:42 +0000 UTCLove that story definitely need to rewrite. Cant waitπ€π€
kiddeath1998
2023-04-24 18:45:52 +0000 UTCYeah Fusui is pretty good but tbh I would do an expy Hinata Hyuga for laughs
Azazyel
2023-04-24 16:56:18 +0000 UTCThat's fair. But for the "more tame" thing, was mainly pointing to Kengan as Baki is insane. Kengan is slightly more believable with their Selective breeding for a race of humans meant for combat in the Kure. Speaking of, which girl do you like the most in Kengan? I prescribe to the Church of Fusui, lol. (Raian's little sister, sniper girl)
Deathknight134
2023-04-24 15:12:10 +0000 UTCI would like to do a fic focusing on Alchemy at some point
Azazyel
2023-04-24 15:06:36 +0000 UTCDoulou 1 or 2 others aren't as good... I don't need mechs in my cultivation fic lol. But it was an idea if I was to use a OC/SI who would have the Avatar elemental bending powers but other powerset could work.
Azazyel
2023-04-24 15:06:09 +0000 UTC"Tame" for universe's where people punch earthquakes into silence and being so good at martial arts can let you live to be a 150 and still be able to punch through boulders... That's just Baki, in Kengan people can remove their body limits, hypnosis, and other crazy stuff
Azazyel
2023-04-24 15:02:38 +0000 UTCDouluo dalu 1/2/3/4? or a battle through the heavens fanfic?
Gilgamos
2023-04-24 15:02:30 +0000 UTCYeah I loved it alot as I literally wrote a 170 plus chapters for it lol
Azazyel
2023-04-24 15:00:36 +0000 UTCAlright on another note i'm excited for the rewrite
Ikito100
2023-04-24 14:59:54 +0000 UTCYesssssss
Ikito100
2023-04-24 14:58:53 +0000 UTCYour Kengan/Baki idea..is the cheat the Water Stream Rock Smashing fist and the Whirlwind Iron Cutting fist martial arts? XD Or something more tame?
Deathknight134
2023-04-24 14:57:47 +0000 UTCrewrite, main reason I am actually subscribing. it had a lot of good things.
Jironimo Ross
2023-04-24 14:57:36 +0000 UTCLike I said the story had a lot of issues, like the whole reality marble bit for his world traveling nonsense. But yeah I was thinking more on the rewrite and instead have the MC be part of the Familia whose goddess has the best ass... That's right Hephaestus and her leather clad booty
Azazyel
2023-04-24 14:55:54 +0000 UTCPerhaps. I will think about it.
Azazyel
2023-04-24 14:53:46 +0000 UTCWell how about travelling to a other universe after finishing the last airbender
Ikito100
2023-04-24 14:51:02 +0000 UTCThat was such a great story. Only OGs know how much of a thrill that was. Please rewrite. Or even better, continue it.
Vulkizaro Zoromi
2023-04-24 14:50:41 +0000 UTCHuh... Like taking the elemental manipulation into Doulou Dalu or Battle Through the Heavens would be cool and I could spin it as some kind of innate body or something. But honestly the avatar world itself is kinda boring as the story is very focused on Aang being a hobo and running around
Azazyel
2023-04-24 14:49:42 +0000 UTCCultivation from battle through the heavens like the Warhammer fic or douluo dalu with the god of the elements or things like that for the last airbender
Ikito100
2023-04-24 14:44:11 +0000 UTCOh my b lol... Uhhh I haven't had any Last Airbender fic ideas honestly. If someone had an idea we could work something out but I got no spark of inspiration for it
Azazyel
2023-04-24 14:37:38 +0000 UTCI don't mean the tall blue people
Ikito100
2023-04-24 14:35:19 +0000 UTCSo I am hoping with a reboot it would bring some interest to it
Azazyel
2023-04-24 14:34:29 +0000 UTCYeah gotta remember that I write almost entirely on commission, like right now I got literally like 15 chapters of stuff thats already paid for that I gotta write. Well out of the 170 something Upgrades chapters only 9 of them were commissioned.
Azazyel
2023-04-24 14:33:57 +0000 UTCEhh was only a niche thing I had after just seeing Avatar 2. If anything would do the Kengan/Baki idea I had. Just good old beating the crap out of one another with a ninety's vibe going on
Azazyel
2023-04-24 14:32:35 +0000 UTCIt didn't really sell and the couple of people who bought it made a stink in the reviews about it being incomplete lol
Azazyel
2023-04-24 14:31:06 +0000 UTCRewrite or just continue it, it's honestly the reason a found you and your stories and a personal favourite of mine. Kind of depressed there's been no updates for it for so long.
Nicholas Castiglione
2023-04-24 14:30:14 +0000 UTCHow about and avatar the last airbender fanfic
Ikito100
2023-04-24 14:29:50 +0000 UTCKinda a Rick move that they stole it can you make them take it down?
Jesse
2023-04-24 14:29:16 +0000 UTC
