Knockout Blonde
Added 2022-07-08 11:46:06 +0000 UTCStarting the script for Knockout Blonde part two, and I'm trying to pick a direction. Should Jamie/Kid K.O./Knockout Blonde go back and try to get revenge on Morpho, or try to move on with their life?
Maybe try to change back?
Knockout Blonde comic available here
https://tgcomics.com/tgc/comics/knockout-blonde/
Comments
Starting rendering on the sequel today actually. It'll be interesting to see how close the story ends up to this
Tom Reynolds
2022-08-02 12:18:20 +0000 UTCWith a villain who can change the body and mind who was, personally, going to make the main character into his girlfriend before just deciding to dispose of her, humiliating her and leaving her permanently changed, it makes thematic sense for her to go back and try to get revenge and, since it's a fetish story, losing and ending up towards a path of bimbofication. Alternately, if she moves on, I could see stripping and moral degradation as a possibility since we don't know what he might have done to her mind in that transformation.
FaeCreature
2022-08-02 11:32:47 +0000 UTCYou ever write tg stories?
Tom Reynolds
2022-07-11 13:10:24 +0000 UTCJamie can't spend her life devoted to seeking revenge. She'll definitely get her chance for it, without a doubt, but she needs to save the city, & she needs to make peace with who she is now, before she takes on Morpho again. She can't fight him & win if she's fighting herself as well. She needs to rebuild herself from the ground up, & face the world, & Morpho, stronger than ever if she's going to win.
Winter Naomi Vera .
2022-07-11 13:05:32 +0000 UTCI like to live... dangerously
Tom Reynolds
2022-07-09 14:12:01 +0000 UTCDawg, why would you have the third option there?
Patrick Hunt
2022-07-09 01:43:42 +0000 UTCIt's kind of hard to pick "move on with their life" since currently only the two characters have been thoroughly established. Because of that, I can't really picture what "move on" means in terms of story. I feel like Morpho has to stay in the story somehow, whether it is a revenge story or not.
idegoido
2022-07-08 13:43:36 +0000 UTCCould it be a combo or blend of two of the options? Perhaps trying to turn back, only to have it become clear she has to move on with her life? Or going after Morpho and then being faced with having to choose between defeating/capturing him and changing back? Or even goes after Morpho and ends up changed further
Ken
2022-07-08 12:10:57 +0000 UTC
