SamSuka
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Demise Doll atack.

A female worried about her weight, runs in the central park of Bustycity.

she is absorbed in keeping her tits inside her top by this she does not realize that something very bad is watching her from the trees ...

The first hunting of Demise Doll.

Demise Doll atack.

Comments

Thank you very much for your opinion, I always listen to my patreons, because of it, the silicone tits have found a bigger space in my patreon, because my patreons asked for and supported them. Yes, in demise doll atack, I exceded me, hahaha! I accept it, but it is not something that I usually do so much, even so, I take note and try to bring more continuity, I promise. and as for the diversity of sizes, it's fine, I'll make illustrations like that and depending on the support, there will be more and more! I take the opportunity to invite all my patreons to give their opinion and their wishes in the same way, this is their space and I always take them into account to improve!

I really like your artwork and appreciate the work you put into your stories/comics and such, they're really good but I have one critique to pick on you with: consistency and diversity. I feel like when you draw boobs you try to draw the biggest ones possible from the angle you're drawing, when this story here starts this girl seems to have really big sized tits but as it goes on her tits seem to change size and they get ridiculously huge, it just kinda throws me out of what I'm reading/seeing. You also change her body type too in other panels her hips are bigger and she seems fatter than in this one. I don't think your artwork itself is lacking, I can see you've improved a LOT since you first started and your skills are good but I think you need to work on keeping anatomy consistent. The other thing too is: why are they always SO big? It's okay to draw moderately sized boobs from time to time. In your other image you refered Demise Doll as having a flat chest when she had quite big bossoms if you're not comparing her with all of your other characters haha. Having diversity in sizes would make it more interesting is all I'm saying.

si quieres darle animos a la corredora, solo podras decirle como en Scary movie: Run bitch RUN!!!

no se a quien darle animos, a la corredora o a la muñeca

ultrafighter3000

Looks promising!


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