Webcomic Storyboard #159
Added 2019-02-14 17:05:32 +0000 UTCRough sketch Storyboard/script of the next Kazakiri webcomic update.
tried to write few chapter scripts ahead for this...well around 3 chapters, I kept editing it... there are few different versions, but I decided to go with this one.
and still, the script still might change during the working process.
I'm also still trying to decide if the dialouge between Sara and Seth part is necessary...
It's a hint about Seth's past, but not sure if I should put it now, or later....
Thank you very much.
Comments
yeah XD I will keep that part for sure~! and I do appreciate the help with the dialogues XDDDD
Jin
2019-02-15 01:20:54 +0000 UTCI did like that part, though I also thought, If I'm forcing that back story there XD but yeah~ I'll keep it!
Jin
2019-02-15 01:18:38 +0000 UTCYou should absolutely keep the dialogue between seth and sara in my opinion (on a separate note english is all good here too no need for me to stick my nose in playing at an editor lol)
Colby Franks
2019-02-14 18:28:57 +0000 UTCAlso, I like the dialogue from Seth and Sara. It's funny. It's doesn't "have" to be there, but I appreciate the humor and slight backstory.
JT Tom
2019-02-14 18:04:37 +0000 UTC
