King Pigeon (Part 1)
Added 2025-04-24 17:17:55 +0000 UTC
I feel like things might be a little rushed, though I hope that’s not the case.
I’m finding it tricky to balance the "too many characters" part. I want to give everyone a moment in the spotlight, so they don’t end up just being there without doing or saying anything.
I’ve decided to try to center focus on Lili and Marc, while still giving her friends enough screen time without drifting too far off track. (Which I'm for the most part free balling...XD LOL)
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Glad to hear, Notme~ 8D Yeah, seems odd to me too, so I added more dialogue XD
Jin
2025-04-25 15:24:02 +0000 UTCDoesn't seem rushed to me, so far the large cast isn't overwhelming. If only 4 people said anything in this large crowd that would be odd.
Notme48
2025-04-25 10:55:08 +0000 UTCThanks Mythkaz~! Though got me worried a bit, had me go look if I made a typo of him being Mayor, instead of president. LOL XDDD
Jin
2025-04-25 09:50:16 +0000 UTCGreat job as always! The Mayor certainly need some tact lessons... Then again, I think his blunt personality may be part of why he is the mayor
Mythkaz
2025-04-25 08:34:40 +0000 UTC
