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You care for me (Part 10) - Sketch Script

Rough sketch storyboard comic script of the next L&M update C:

As always,  the sketch and dialogue lines can still be edited or changed during the working process.

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You care for me (Part 10) - Sketch Script

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Fair enough! And well, I took a while to reply -w-

Mythkaz

Sorry, I only noticed the reply now 😅 (patreon sometimes don't notify replies) oohh, and both those examples are alright to me 😁 when I say unrelated I mean really unrelated, like you can't even understand why comment such word or even find any coloration. Example..“First” “comment” “self advertising” or when the story is a serious tone and nothing funny happening and only wrote “haha” or “nice” or “cute” or “adorable” without specifying which part you found funny, or adorable, dude , did you even read it!? 🤣

Jin

To be fair, I just sometimes say stuff like *eats popcorn* or "the plot thickens" which just mean I am enjoying the plotline Or a bad joke XP I just ask to be sure I know what you mean with unrelated comments, have those too myself

Mythkaz

Why wouldn't I be 😄 definitely no problem~ (only time I would roll my eyes on a comment is when it has nothing to do with anything, like...“first” 😑) actually, I would even rather it to be expressing negative feedback or no comments than that🤣

Jin

The plot thickens! Great job as usual! Btw, are you Ok with my regular comments? (mean more the ones that arent as substantial like this one)

Mythkaz

Glad you're enjoying the comic 😆 (I sometimes would go back and read them too, but find myself having a hard time to read around early to mid season 1 XDDD) Hehe, well, guess we'll just have to see what will happen to her 😆

Jin

I've been enjoying going back and rereading sections and summarizing them a bit. Having caught up a few months ago, I remember a lot of the main story and some random details but also missed a ton of other details because I read it all so fast. .... I'm gald Erin's back in the story, it really would be odd if she was forgotten about. I hope her day doesn't get worse, it depends if she gets rescued before or after becomming a midnight snack :)

Notme48

Now that you laid it out like that, it does sound like she's having a pretty bad day....so far☝️👀 (could get worse) LOL XD but yeah~ It's been a long time since I draw her, so wanted to include her 😆

Jin

Poor Erin So far she's had a 0/10 "work vacation" -they wouldn't take her forign currency and got bailed out by her mortal enemy via a robot. - found out she's being watched by the robots. (I doubt she belived Pacifica's "just kidding") - had a unsucessful interview with Shing, unable to get the answers her bias wants. - dissapears from the story for over a year - now she's gonna get attcked by a blood thirsty teen on her first p...vampireic awakening. I do hope the rest of her vacation get better from here.

Notme48


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