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Starlight-Damsel

Summary: Blue nebula goes through hypno slave training, to prepare her for her fate of being sold as a slave. Full story: You, the supervillain at the head of Metro City’s criminal underworld, sit and count your money as you watch the heroine Blue Nebula lead away, gagged and blindfolded by your henchmen. The livestream was a success, that much is clear to all. It turns out that the vast majority of the population of Metro City prefer to see there heroines tied up and on show for all to watch! You spent the evening watching Blue Nebula struggle, plead and beg for her life as vote after vote poured in, each one ticking ever closer to revealing her final fate….. Unsurprisingly, the citizens voted less for the death options. That’s good. In your opinion, death is far too final, she is destined for something far more…. long term. In the end, her fate is to be broken, trained, and sold as a slave. You smile, your science teams are even now preparing for the guest of ‘honour’ to arrive at her new home. The process you have designed is simple and elegant, yet brutally effective. By utilising the X32 compound (the element that suppresses her super powers) in an intense hypnosis and slave training programme, you will be able to permanently mould her mind and personality to something far more submissive and better suited to her new life. After preparing all the equipment, running the numbers and ensuring that all security protocols are in place (in your line of work, it pays to be careful), you are ready to start and order your scientists and henchmen to begin project Blue Shift. Blue Nebula is brought into the lab on the end of a leash, the X32 collar round her neck still suppressing her powers and firmly reminding her who is in control. Her eyes meet with yours and you are pleased to see that there is still that fiery spark of defiance as she glares at you. “Why… why are you doing this?” She manages to say as she stares you down. “Why am I doing this?” You reply coldly. “Because you have been a thorn in my side for long enough, but I am about to solve that problem… permanently.” You watch a look of fear and shock flood over her face. “P…please….” she mumbles “please don’t kill me.” “Oh no, nothing of the sort, I wouldn’t want to go against the will of the people now would I?” Blue Nebula looks up at you, confused, wondering what you are talking about. “You see, that little camera show earned me back quite a bit of the money that you cost me with all your heroics and do-gooding, but there was another purpose.” “Other…. Purpose?” “Yes… you see the people of this fine city voted on your fate, thanks to them you will not die.” You see her visibly relax, arms falling loose as she breaths out a sigh of relief that quickly turns into a panicked gasp as a trio of scientists secure her to the ceiling via her wrists. “However, they did vote for another fate all together. Blue Nebula, you are to be hypnotised, mind broken and sold as a slave to the highest bidder… please do not resist, we wouldn’t want to damage you.” You turn and leave, listening to her struggles and cries as she writhes and tugs at her bonds before falling sullen and silent. You nod to the head scientist as you pass, giving the go ahead to begin. The first days of the training are the most intense, as Blue Nebula’s will is still at its strongest. She is tied stood up, hands above her head, blindfolded, and is blasted with various noises, frequencies and vaporised X32 to wear down her will. Despite this, she puts up a fight, drawing on last reserves of courage and stubbornness to resist the hypnotic influence of the training. She breaks mid week. Her mind slips, and she starts to accept the programming. She still knows who she is but she starts to obey the commands and instructions as they take hold of her mind. Now that she is resisting less, you allow her to be tied sitting down to a chair as she is being hypnotised, she may as well be comfortable as she accepts her new commands properly. By the end of the week she is firmly in your grasp, nearly all parts of her personality have been re-written to be something far more submissive and pleasing. She refers to you as ‘master’ and will obey nearly all of your commands without hesitation. You still allowed her to keep a small amount of her pride and honour, mainly so you can enjoy watching her blush and shy away as she realises what she is doing. It’s almost a shame to sell her off, you think. You have done such a good job with the hypnosis. You wonder if anyone would suspect you if you put in an anonymous bid to buy her in the auction you are having in a couple of weeks…

Blue Nebula awakes in a dark basement, shacked and confused. The votes for what to do with the heroine next were split. Her captors found a way to satisfy everyone. “Welcome, viewers” a voice rings out. “Welcome to the preview of Reality Nebula”. “W-what’s going on?” Nebula helplessly struggles against her bonds. “For a modest fee you can plug your mind into our virtual reality, where anything you can imagine is possible. Perhaps you want to watch our captive choke on poisonous gas…” The room fills with a sickly green gaseous mixture. Nebula’s eyes are wide, her hands going to her throat, until she struggles to breathe at all. Then the gas dissipates. “Or, perhaps you’d prefer to overwhelm our heroine with energy blasts…” Nebula is struck initially in the chest, stomach, then every angle from blasts of concussive energy, until her entire body is covered with a stream of electrified force making the poor girl shake and tremble as every cell feels like its on fire”. “Reality Nebula is the most advanced mind-computer interface ever constructed. What you see is a digital representation of Nebula’s mind, trapped here in our reality”. We see a different view of Nebula in the real world, lying down, with nodes attached to her head, as she shifts uncomfortably as though stuck in a nightmare. Then we see her digital representation in the basement. “Every experience is completely real to Nebula, and there is no limit to what we can do. Even time moves at an accelerated rate. In the time it takes you to finish your coffee, we can sentence Nebula to 10 years in solitary confinement” “What? Wait, no!” A montage of images shows Nebula hunched down, head cradled in her arms, then lying in different positions, passing the time by making shapes in the dust, as she slowly feels as though she is losing her mind. The viewer counter shows thousands of viewers. “Welcome back, Nebula. It’s been a decade since you’ve seen the sun, while for us it’s not even afternoon yet” “You bastards! Let me out of here!!” She pleads desperately, tears lining her pretty face. “To end today’s preview, we will allow 100 guests to spend several virtual years – or the rest of the day in our time – doing to Nebula whatever they please! Enjoy eternity, Nebula! Mwahahahaha!” Evil laughter ends the broadcast, with a closeup of a very frightened Nebula.

KaineDamo

For Nebula x

Starlight-Damsel

Another for Blue Nebula or for any other character you've done?

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