Feedback/ Suggestion for future illustrations (Need some responses)
Added 2025-03-17 04:04:24 +0000 UTCI would like to get some feedback on my illustrations if possible. I feel like they just lack something :/
1. Which area do you think I should improve at?
2. Should I continue to add backgrounds?
3. What would you like to see more of?
Feel free to tell me anything!
できれば私のイラストについてフィードバックをいただきたいです。何かが足りないような気がしていて… :/
1. どの部分を改善すべきだと思いますか？
2. 背景を引き続き追加した方がいいでしょうか？
3. もっと見たいものは何ですか？
どんなことでも気軽に教えてください！
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Comments
I did notice! I guess it's just matter of preference, I like if there's more than that 😄
Yesbunintended
2025-03-19 21:04:46 +0000 UTCIf you check closely, it's different for each image btw. Are there anymore crowning stages? In my opinion there's early intermediate and late. Sorry if I couldn't really understand your statement!
Niched person (ニッチの人)
2025-03-19 08:40:26 +0000 UTCIt would require more pages, but actually only the crotch/crowning needed to be changed for each one; you wouldn't need to change posture much/at all. Kinda like Firefly's... But Firefly also only had like three stages of crowning (I'm not counting the head slipping back in) before the head was fully out.
Yesbunintended
2025-03-19 07:45:03 +0000 UTCThanks for your response! By more gradual do you mean even longer and more pages 😵💫(Similar to Firefly's set?)
Niched person (ニッチの人)
2025-03-18 11:39:54 +0000 UTCYou're doing a great job already! But if I could wish for stuff, it would probably be 1) more gradual progress during crowning/birth in general 2) I understand you're not comfortable with reluctant mothers, but maybe birthing in secret while in public? 3) full births
Yesbunintended
2025-03-18 10:45:33 +0000 UTCThank you for responding! I will keep your suggestions in mind 👍.
Niched person (ニッチの人)
2025-03-18 05:54:02 +0000 UTCThanks for taking your time to respond! I would like to do full sequences more too but if I did that there would be only like one post per month because I'm super slow 😅. Reluctant is a bit much but I might do some 'unexpected timing' sequences in upcoming works.
Niched person (ニッチの人)
2025-03-18 05:52:18 +0000 UTCI honestly think your art is really good right now? There is always room for improvement and refinement, but honestly it's just a general improvement that comes with practice now. I do like having a background. Having a proper setting is really nice, it can add a lot of emotional intensity to the situation. I would like to see more full birth scenes and even potentially more reluctant mothers. I really enjoy when there is a moment of not being sure if they're ready to be a mom or even want to have this baby.
MuchBirth
2025-03-17 16:18:26 +0000 UTCTotally perfect in my opinion u dont need any improvement rn😻 Yes keep having background unless you doing just like a character illustration but if yoy doing a sequence have background And ofc i would love to see more birth!👌🏽♥️
Prophet
2025-03-17 15:45:08 +0000 UTC
