What do you think about comic Justiciar?
Added 2021-04-12 08:33:23 +0000 UTCSo.. First chapter of comic Justiciar already posted for everyone and you can read it here!
https://www.patreon.com/Sunny_Way/posts?filters[tag]=Justiciar%20Comic
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https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/sunnyway/folder/928453/Justiciar-web-comic/
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https://www.deviantart.com/sunny125/gallery/77093762/-justiciar-web-comic
This is our first try, first big work. We learned a lot, while creating this comic. We understend our mistakes, we know what we need to do and how to make better. We already start working on next chapter, wich will be better and more quallity. So we hope, that we can show chapter two in the middle or the end of summer.
We really want to know what do you think about comic!
Tell us, what do you like in our comic? What was whe worst part? Was it interesting to read, to watch? What we miss?
Wait all your comments! ^^
Also. Fun fact about comic - last 15 pages was drawn in fast paced in 2.5 weeks! And after the illnes! (yeap, that one) We really wanted to finish it till the New Year. And, how I think, those pages looks a bit better then previos :D
Comments
Interesting! Thank you~
Sunny Way
2021-04-14 08:30:57 +0000 UTCI like it, I'm wondering what's going on (in a good way) and where it's going. The art is good, I like Lin'el and her stylish cigarette holder. -The English is a bit awkward in places, though not enough to make the meaning unclear. -We only get Lin'el's name on the last page, even though she's been in the comic for 20 pages. -The main characters are hyper-competent and all business, and it makes it a bit hard to connect with them. I do like the bit on the last page where Aquilon is like "Where have you beeeen...?" and the bit where Lin'el says she trusts him to guard her back, but it would be nice to see a bit more of them outside of doing their jobs. Like Lin'el at the bar complaining that they cancelled her favorite TV show, or Aquilon trying to chase down rare Pokemon cards for his collection (no, don't do that one, lol). I realize this was the introductory issue and there probably wasn't room for that sort of thing though. -It being a fantasy-oriented world, I sort of want more scenery porn, but you may be deliberately going for a sort of gritty urban landscape instead, I dunno, that's just me. -I want to see what Aquilon is seeing when he senses traces of etheric. I think maybe we got that once when he mentioned tracks on the walls? -Favorite part is probably Aquilon's smarmy not-gonna-promise-nothing smile on page 8 when the cops tell him not to touch anything. Least favorite is the bit on page 22 where Lin'el says the thing almost got her, because I didn't really see it almost getting her in the art.
Cloplestia
2021-04-13 20:52:28 +0000 UTCThank you~
Sunny Way
2021-04-13 08:47:26 +0000 UTCI'm enjoying it. Lovely drawing, interesting world, interesting story. If I were looking for something to be offended at, it is that the only person in the whole thing who is not physically perfect is stupid and/or corrupt. But equating physical imperfection with incompetence or evil is a custom as old as our species itself. Besides, I like to see characters who are beautiful and physically perfect. This is a fantasy, after all, and beauty and perfection are good escapes from the mundane world.
Bill
2021-04-12 18:19:16 +0000 UTC
