Story number 2
Added 2017-11-01 02:42:00 +0000 UTCIts finally finished.
Sorry for the delay, check it out here.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lrY0Q1x3ibA5PvkJ7wMwe1c7rmsZIY_2qUourbtWhMA/edit
It needs a bit of an edit that I'll work on in the next few days before i get started on the next one, so let me know what you think. And all you folks on the Suggestion Tier, let me know what you want me to put in the next poll.
Thanks to all of you!
Comments
Excellent build up, that and the context of the public scene really added texture to the whole piece. It seemed like it became a bit rushed near the end, but honestly given the total length of the piece it would be greedy to want anything more. So glad you're writing more, for my money your work has been the best that can be found in these genres.
Glaucon
2017-11-25 15:56:46 +0000 UTC
