The First Visit (Exclusive December 2024)

(All characters are consenting adults)

An old Christmas legend speaks of an evil spirit that Santa Claus once tamed and trained to turn bad adults into good submissive sex-crazed women, and if it didn't work on its first visit, it would return the year afterward and make the bad person’s situation worse.

For a long time that legend was lost to time, but this year the story of Coinquinatus resurfaced, and with it, a string of women claiming that they were actually very rich and powerful men, but none of it was confirmed by any news outlet.

So most people Zackary included didn’t believe it was real, after all, if it were that would be crazy, but it would also mean Santa Claus was real, and most adults didn’t believe he existed. The problem was that both Santa and Coinquinatus were real, and tonight Zackary would meet Coinquinatus.

Zackary went to bed early the night of Christmas Eve as he was planning to wake up early because he had a long day tomorrow. It started with heading over to his local homeless shelter and volunteering for a couple of hours.

Then he was off to drop off some toys to the kids he often played with when he volunteered at a local hospital. After that, he had a two-hour drive to his parent's house so he could meet up with his family and spend Christmas together.

It was going to be a long day, but he was more than happy about it. So Zackary fell asleep before nine, and five hours later a sneaky Christmas spirit made its way into his house. Coinquinatus entered his bedroom and looked down at Zackary.

It then made its list appear and went all the way down to the z section. Coinquinatus grabbed the list and looked at the next name. Zackary Hillston was written on it, and next to his name, the reason why he was on the list was written.

It said Zackary was a horrible man who forced his employees to work overtime for free, sexually harassed the women who worked for him and had stolen over a million dollars from different charities this year alone.

Coinquinatus then looked at Zackary, and thanks to the spirit’s power, when it looks at someone it can confirm their current name, as well as their original name if they had it changed at all. So Coinquinatus was able to see that Zackary was in fact Zackary Hillston.

Coinquinatus started laughing, which woke Zackary up. Zackary jumped up and grabbed the metal flashlight he kept neck to his bed in case the power went out and he had to go check on his elderly neighbor.

Zackary turned it on and flashed it at Coinquinatus, only to find the voice was coming from some dark mist in the form of a large human man. Zackary panicked a bit and asked what the hell it was and why it was there.

Coinquinatus laughed again and told Zackary it was a spirit that punished bad people, and it was here because Zackary was on its list. Zackary looked at the spirit confused and told it he wasn't a bad person.

Coinquinatus laughed again and said a few good deeds didn’t cancel out the really bad ones he committed, and because of that, it was time for his punishment. Coinquinatus started to get closer to Zackary, and Zackary just panicked and tried to hit it with the flashlight.

That did nothing though, and Coinquinatus was easily able to get close enough to shred Zackary’s clothes, and then possess him. Zackary fell down onto the bed and tried to yell but Coinquinatus kept him silent.

With Coinquinatus inside him, Zackary felt stiff, and almost like his body had been inflated with air. That feeling only lasted a few minutes as Coinquinatus transformed him. Since to Coinquinatus, this was Zackary’s first time, he went easy on her transformation.

Coinquinatus merely made her short by five inches, a little bit thinner, and only gave her a small pair of breasts. Zackary wasn’t all the different otherwise, same hair color, same hair length, and only a slightly more feminine face.

Once it exited from Zackery, it transformed to look just like how she did as a man, with one little change. Its cock was double, if not triple the size Zackary’s had been. Zackary stared at the spirit that had taken her body and then down at herself.

She grew bright red and immediately covered up her new small breasts with one arm, and her flat crotch with the hand from her other arm. Zackary then looked up at the spirit and asked why it turned her into a girl and stole her body.

Coinquinatus laughed and said it was so they could play a game of sorts. It then explained that if Zackary wanted her body back, she had to have sex with it, and make it cum before the balls on the spirit's body jingle and let out a ringing noise.

Zackary looked shocked and embarrassed, then yelled at the spirit saying there was no way she was having sex with it. Coinquinatus shrugged and said that was fine, that was her choice after all, it just meant it could leave early and that Zackary would accept her new life as a woman.

Coinquinatus then went to walk out of the room, but Zackary stopped him. She begged him to change her back, but Coinquinatus said no. It told her that there was only one way to turn back, then pointed down at its cock.

Coinquinatus then told her it wasn't as bad as it sounded, she was far from the first man turned woman it had sex with, but if she didn’t enjoy it then she would be the first at something. Zackary got quiet and even more embarrassed.

She looked down at herself. She couldn't stay like this, she had to do it. Zackary looked at him and agreed to it. Coinquinatus smiled and came back over. It laid down on Zackary’s bed and presented its massive cock.

It told Zackary that it was all up to her, how she worked it, and how fast, but it reminded her again there was a time limit. Zackery nodded and got on top of him. She looked down at the cock for a moment, still hesitant.

She couldn't believe that this was happening to her, or that she was really about to ride some spirit's cock. Zackery lifted herself up and got the tip of its cock against her and lowered herself down. The discomfort that came when it first started to go in made Zackery pull out.

She got red and looked down at it. Coinquinatus rolled its eyes and told her that feeling passes once it gets in all the way, and it told Zackary to have some courage, the same courage she had when stealing from charities.

Zackary puffed her cheeks and closed her eyes. She had no idea what it was talking about, she’s never stolen anything, and if she was going to she wouldn't do it from a charity. It was clearly just an evil spirit trying to mess with her.

Zackery got into position again and pushed Coinquinatus’s cock inside her, this time getting about an inch of it in before stopping. Zackary looked to the side due to her embarrassment, which caused Coinquinatus to laugh at her and call her cute, making her even more embarrassed.

Zackary refocused on her mission and got the rest of Coinquinatus’ cock inside her. She resisted the urge to moan once it hit her sweet spot, instead, she stayed determined to get her body back by making Coinquinatus cum.

Zackary did her best to work its cock in the ways women had done on her in the past, she figured that was the best way to get Coinquinatus to cum, but turns out that it was the opposite, it was the way to pleasure her body more and make her cum.

Zackary let out a gasp as her body exploded all over Coinquinatus. Her orgasm was more powerful than she could have imagined. It was the best thing she’d ever felt, and the most overwhelming, Zackary ended up passing out from it.

Coinquinatus was shocked and just looked up at her. It laughed saying that Zackary had managed to be one of its first, the first to pass out on top of it with its cock in her. Coinquinatus poked her a few times to see if she was going to wake up, and when she didn’t Coinquinatus declared her a loser.

The next morning Zackary woke up in a panic. She sat and looked down. She had hoped that last night was just some bad dream, but seeing that she still had breasts, no dick, and cum coming out of her, she was met with the hard truth.

Coinquinatus had indeed come to her in the night, turned her into a woman, and came inside her, then it left her as she was, and now, she was stuck as a woman, and she really didn’t know why, she swears she didn’t do anything bad.