A Gamer Adventure - The End and the Future
Added 2024-02-03 04:11:01 +0000 UTCHi, everyone.
My longest story, A Gamer Adventure, finally came to an end.
I hope that you all enjoyed it.
I have a question about the future of the story and the universe, whether you prefer it to continue ... and if you prefer it, in what form?
Please note that, regardless of the result, I will probably have a small break.
Comments
π―% there was a lot of sexual tension and build up hinting at a future relationship between him and the princess, but before they could firmly build one, he was sent to the Chaos Realm. Then when he returned, he story ended immediately before he even reunited with the princess, much less tied off the threads with her. And what about Aviada's friend Carla, wasn't she going to join the harem? And speaking of Aviada, he barely acknowledged her return much less had a proper reunion. Where did she go? What did she do? How did she get back? I don't think these loose ends can be done justice in just a few epologue chapters.
OtakuModeEngage
2024-02-09 22:25:24 +0000 UTCHonestly the ending you made was so meh that I don't even know. I mean this is a webnovel so trash endings are to be expected. That being said it doesn't seem like you cashed in on a ton of set up you made. It seems like you just threw out a rushed ending so that you could focus on your shiny new story. No actual NSFW scene with the princess and her clones. I expected the goddess behind the system to join the harem. Maybe be the lust goddess the angel alluded to back in the day. There was no actual reunion scene with the girls. I expected him to see his mom at some point in the story and perhaps have something happen there. I don't think you can wrap everything up with a few NSFW scenes. A long time skip is skipping the scenes we actually want to see. I don't think a full sequel is really needed. You don't seem to want to write this story anymore so I don't see the point in forcing a sequel out. Plus you only need to revolve a few issues so not really worth a full sequel. Proper reunion, visiting home, finding away around the domain keeping them locked up, reveal himself to the world, setting the world on a better track, and figuring out the elemental spark stuff. So my vote would be for like 30 more chapters of this story actually focused on ending the book. A lot of mini time skips to move things quickly to hit the important bits.
Vincent
2024-02-05 08:49:07 +0000 UTCIMO have a few epilog that basically imply happy ever after and then jump to the story of his kids.
sihko gaud
2024-02-04 10:19:05 +0000 UTCHonestly, I'm all for a sequel starting directly after, but I don't feel like that is what you want. And unfortunately, it's doubtful that the series would be high quality if you aren't passionate about it.
Distort3dBlob
2024-02-04 00:58:28 +0000 UTCThe ending felt abrupt to me. Earlier in the story, when the Dragon world was brought up, I thought the story was gonna head there eventually. It feels like there are many story threads that were left untied. I had also hoped that after he got his girls back together, they would do something together. So it's strange to me that it ends after he finally finds the last one. Thus I vote for a sequel, as I feel this story still has so much untapped potential left with God's, dragons, and other worlds.
OtakuModeEngage
2024-02-03 18:59:11 +0000 UTCId prefer if you focused on finishing outstanding series, would give me confidence to try some of them.
AZ
2024-02-03 08:47:11 +0000 UTCCan you give a bit more details on what the plot of the sequel will be like? Also, any chance that you could make those multi chapter PDFs in the future? Reading chapter by chapter in Patreon is a major pain.
Nanaya7Nights
2024-02-03 06:13:25 +0000 UTCI haven't really kept up with the story but I voted for an expansion/rewrite. Not because I want one, but because I believe you can turn it into a ebook with decent commercial potential. You have had my support ever since I found your work on FFnet/AO3 and my best wishes are with you.
KM
2024-02-03 05:53:12 +0000 UTCMaybe now you can update the Index. I would like to see how the group operates over the next few years.
mhaj58
2024-02-03 04:32:46 +0000 UTCDamn I need to catch up. Because of that I have no idea what Iβd want but I have a feeling Iβd like either of the top two options(sequel options immediately and timeskip)
Lamig
2024-02-03 04:20:03 +0000 UTC
