Love Unheard Of - Prologue - Page 45
Added 2025-02-10 01:09:57 +0000 UTC
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Eddie’s enthralled and perplexed expressions, Dana’s expression as he wells up and cries, finally, Harlan’s expression of devastation all hit so much harder fully rendered. I started welling up myself. It’s all so beautiful in every way.
Deltawrc
2025-02-10 02:33:48 +0000 UTCEddie, don't get distracted by the thematic parallels between the sub-narrative and the narrative! The man's available for kissing! His kiss vulnerability has appeared! Now kiss!
Rob MacWolf
2025-02-10 02:02:44 +0000 UTC
