Comic: Metal Medium - Chapter 1
Added 2025-03-18 18:18:06 +0000 UTCHello everyone!
Chapter 1 of the EDI comic is finally done. I've taken some feedback on board from my previous one and given how this will be a multi-part series, with each chapter featuring different side-characters, I've tried to keep it shorter than the old Wonder Woman comic was. One massive contention I got regarding that comic was the lack of brevity, so I've tried to make it a bit "snappier" with this one. I've also toned down the fonts a bit, tried to make them sleeker and to not be as much in the way of the action as it was before - another bunch of feedback I got. As you might imagine, feedback is as always welcome, so if you've got thoughts about future installments of this (Chapter 3 is being written still, for instance), there's plenty of room for that to be considered for future chapters.
It's been a long time coming, and it was really only after new years heading into 2025 that I started getting the time proper to start making it, so I'm glad to finally feel like I've got it in motion like this. I hope folks enjoy it - it's been rendered at 1440p so it might be prudent to maximize the images above before perusing the pages. The archive of all of them is down below in the attachments, and also in the fancy new "comic" folder over in the grand archive, if you want to download the .rar to your device to browse at your leisure.
Either way, thank you, as always, for your continued support and for all of your kind words. The next chapters are underway and I'll be trying to dedicate Tuesdays as much as possible to them in the future. I know some folks were big fans of my previous comic entries, so both hope that this will make you happy, and I'd also like to apologize for how long it's taken me to get this sorted. The new schedule definitely is working its magic.
Take care out there folks, both of yourselves and each other!
/DH
Comments
How did I miss this?! Awesome!
Crawdaddy
2025-03-29 13:05:47 +0000 UTC"...klesk has diamond hands" this shit got me. as for suggestions, any kinda 'slutification' story is incredible. Changes in clothes, getting bigger 'assets' etc etc. That kinda stuff bangs. Great story and start. So stoked for more!
BearAwareness
2025-03-20 20:18:36 +0000 UTCSorry to hear that Gorechuck, I really prefer this one myself
DH
2025-03-19 10:59:32 +0000 UTCNice 👍🐺
Hakha Asul Szeifiphir
2025-03-19 05:13:26 +0000 UTCI really miss the old Miranda model. This one's hideous; doesn't look anything like her. :(
Gorechuck
2025-03-19 04:58:22 +0000 UTCAbsolutely loved the casual dialogue of your characters. There some great about your characters doing non sex related things despite their figures
Masari Bonnefoy
2025-03-19 02:48:12 +0000 UTCBravo and the concept was funny too
Nicholas Hernandez
2025-03-19 00:06:26 +0000 UTCThis was really good and decently funny! I would have liked more angles/positions of the females though. Also, For the comics it would be my preference if the foreplay, build up climax, after math was stretched out a lot more. And if it was with only one big guy and 1 maybe more multiple females, like the big orc and the final fantasy ladies.
org123
2025-03-18 21:48:41 +0000 UTCi do understand that this would take a long while to animate but i would still love for it to happen 🙏bless it be if you do and please take your breaks when you can 😉
No name
2025-03-18 21:39:33 +0000 UTCI've tried making the speech bubble "tails" a bit thicker and larger, but maybe I need to ramp them up further. I'll see about maybe mixing up font colors to differentiate stuff even more in the future.
DH
2025-03-18 20:15:29 +0000 UTCHmmm, I think it may be best for you to do something in regards about font colors as well? While the manner of speech really makes it obvious, I’m afraid to say that it takes a hot second or two for me to know who’s talking what xD Font colors, colored speech bubbles, whatever works to differentiate which belongs to who, maybe?
AlphaPrimaris
2025-03-18 20:02:15 +0000 UTCMy sweet Miri! Great stuff.
Varttiva
2025-03-18 19:47:27 +0000 UTCHundreds of hours, indeed.
DH
2025-03-18 18:42:25 +0000 UTCMan imagine if this was turned into an animation too, that would take a lot of work I bet
UJX
2025-03-18 18:37:36 +0000 UTCMiranda I'm so ashamed
Ron McCullough
2025-03-18 18:26:21 +0000 UTCSexbots are the best
Jess Westen
2025-03-18 18:20:38 +0000 UTCOh my sweet Sheppy Jesus.
SumSkittles
2025-03-18 18:20:30 +0000 UTC
