Unintended Cultivator V3: Chapter 6 – Cultivation Mysteries
Added 2023-07-08 04:41:34 +0000 UTCSen tried to get what rest he could while Lo Meifeng’s boat approached, because he suspected there would be little enough rest after she arrived. He made a point to commit the name Elder Bo had given him for the body cultivation technique he’d, almost accidentally, used. Five-Fold Body Transformation. Sen didn’t really understand what that meant, or even what it entailed for his current level of body cultivation. For that matter, he didn’t even know what relative stage of body cultivation he was in anymore. He had been in the body cultivation equivalent to foundation formation, but he’d also never faced a tribulation before. Master Feng hadn’t been terribly specific about them, other than to say that they could happen at any advancement, but they almost always happened between major stages of cultivation advancement.
Given that it had been Sen’s first tribulation ever, he suspected that his body cultivation was now in the equivalent to core formation. It did make him wonder what that actually meant, though. With core formation, there was a fundamental change in how the dantian operated, how one processed qi and used it. With body cultivation, though, it likely meant an similarly fundamental change in how the body worked. Of course, the only real way to understand any changes to his body would be to perform tests. With Lo Meifeng bearing down on him like an angry mother hen, he didn’t expect he’d get much opportunity for that. She’d want to stick him on the boat and take him back to the ship as soon as possible. He did try to take advantage of the few precious minutes of solitude he had available to him. One of the mysteries that had vexed Sen was why body cultivation and spirit cultivation operated separately. Granted, they had only diverged for him very recently, but for most cultivators following both paths, the advancements came entirely independently.
None of his teachers had a good explanation for why that was. Sure, the body and spirit were different, but they were also connected to each other in profound ways. That the entire cultivation world took it for granted that they should be developed independently bothered him. It seemed irrational to him. If anything, it seemed to him that every cultivator would want a cultivation development technique that helped them develop both simultaneously. Again, his own experiences with simultaneous advancement hadn’t been terribly pleasant, but he’d been doing it by accident. It seemed to him that a well-developed cultivation system would account for those realities and develop cultivation aids and resources to help limit the negative side effects. The longer Sen lay there pondering the oddities of cultivation, the more he found himself frowning over something Elder Bo had said in passing. As though elder divine spirit animals said anything in passing.
“Why was that my first tribulation?” Sen asked himself out loud.
He had passed from qi condensing to foundation formation without a hint of heavenly lightning or any other kind of tribulation. What had been the difference? He’d had a divine turtle baby-stepping him through this advancement. If anything should have shielded him from heavenly retribution, it seemed that the presence of the turtle would have done it. Yet, it hadn’t seemed to slow down the tribulation at all. Unless, he thought, it did. It wasn’t like he had another tribulation to compare it to. Maybe that had been the heavens version of a light rebuke to acknowledge the turtle’s participation. That was an idea that put a chill in Sen’s soul. He’d survived the tribulation, but he thought it only would have taken another minute or two of those lightning strikes to kill him. His makeshift protection was on the verge of collapse at the end.
Still, none of that explained why he hadn’t suffered under the heavens lash before this advancement. What had been different about those advancements? What had been different about this one? Sen hadn’t landed on a complete answer to that question by the time Lo Meifeng arrived, although he had an inkling about it. Once she arrived, though, he had to put those thoughts away. It was too hard to concentrate on them around all of her shouting. He let it go on for about five minutes before he lost his patience.
“Enough,” he commanded.
Lo Meifeng was so shocked by either the command or his tone that she fell silent. Instead, she just stared at him with an incredulous expression.
Sen took a breath and continued. “At no point did an older, more experienced cultivator warn me that there was an elder divine turtle following us around. Then again, I might have been even more eager to go if I’d known. You know that cultivation has risks. Some of those risks are bad, like offending demonic cultivators. Some of those risks are necessary, like following through on fortuitous encounters. If I was anyone else, would you reallyhave discouraged me from taking the advice of divine turtle?”
Lo Meifeng’s cheeks turned a little red in embarrassment when Sen pointed out that she should have known there was a vastly powerful spirit beast trailing them. When he asked flat out about taking the turtle’s advice, she sighed.
“No. I wouldn’t have. Only a fool ignores a divine turtle.”
“So, beyond that, what would have changed if you’d come along? Would you have prevented me from gathering medicinal plants? Refused to let me make a healing elixir?”
“No,” she admitted. “But that’s not the point. It’s my job to protect you. I can’t do that if you run off by yourself all the time. Especially when a divine turtle is going to trap us all on the damn ship.”
“Wait. What?”
“The turtle sealed us up on the ship for the entire duration of your little date on the beach. Now, imagine how that might have gone if it had been something less friendly and benevolent than a turtle. What if you’d caught the attention of a sea dragon instead?”
Sen really stopped to consider that possibility. Dragons weren’t innately hostile to humans, but they weren’t especially predisposed to like humans either. Dragons were proud, arrogant, and terrifyingly powerful by nature. In most myths and tales, encounters with dragons ended badly for the humans involved. Sen was good at some things, but he didn’t expect that he would have fared much better at keeping a dragon happy than the people in those stories.
“That would have been bad, probably,” he admitted. “But do you really think you could have protected me from a sea dragon?”
“Not a chance. Not for long anyway. But I could have bought you time to run away, to escape, to do that hiding thing that you do so well. I know you hate having me watching you all the time. I really do understand why it’s frustrating for you. But until something changes in the situation or my orders, it’s the reality for now. I’m not asking you to like it. I’m just asking that you don’t actively work against me doing my job.”
“I really don’t most of the time,” said Sen.
“I recognize and appreciate that. I just need you to recognize and appreciate that we assess risk differently. I have to think about the worst possible version of events. So, while something like this beach looks harmless enough to you, I see it as a pit filled with potential disaster and hordes of rampaging spirit beasts.”
There was a time, not that long ago, when Sen would have snickered at the idea of a horde of rampaging spirit beasts. After his experiences in that town that had been stripped of all human life, the possibility seemed all too real. Sen rubbed his eyes. His body had mostly finished healing, which was truly amazing and remarkable, but he’d been through a lot that day. He felt wrung out. He just wanted to sleep for a while and maybe roast an entire cow to eat. Maybe a boar would be good as well. Oh, and some ducks would be delicious. Sen forced his mind away from food with an effort. He couldn’t remember the last time he’d felt so hungry. He’d gotten very used to being able to skip meals without consequence when necessary. At that moment, though, he felt like he could eat through everything in his storage ring. He made himself focus on Lo Meifeng.
“I will try to not make your job harder. I can’t promise I’ll succeed all the time, but I really will try.”
“That’s all I ask, that you try.”
“Fair enough. Now, seriously though, how did you miss that turtle?”
He’d meant it to poke a little fun at the woman, but he was also curious what she’d say. Instead of answering, she just lifted an eyebrow at him.
“How did you?”
Sen didn’t have an answer for that. True, he hadn’t been actively looking for spirit beasts, but he had been keeping a pretty close watch on the surrounding area. He supposed that the turtle must have been using some kind of technique like the one that Sen himself used. The turtle was, no doubt, a master of water qi. So, maybe there was some version of the technique that used water to blend a person into the background. Sen looked out to ship and sighed. He’d have plenty of opportunity to try to work out how something like that might work. On the bright side, he should also have some time to try to decide just where and how enlightenment fit into the cultivation puzzle. If there was a reason that he hadn’t been suffering from tribulations so far, he thought that it was probably tied up with his active pursuit of moments of enlightenment.
Comments
“I was anyone else, would you reallyhave discouraged me from taking the advice of divine turtle?”———>> found several typos in this sentence
Dalyse
2024-03-15 16:53:59 +0000 UTCLo Meifeng needs to get a grip. She’s a body guard. Every time anything happens, she takes out her frustration on Sen because she couldn’t deal with it. If she’s not up for the job she should ask for a replacement. It’s not Sen’s job to take responsibility for her inadequacies.
Letheed
2023-08-07 19:32:02 +0000 UTCI feel like that's too obvious. Like, someone, somewhere should have found that out by now. Even random sect number 3 in every city has core formation cultivators. If being a dual cultivator is super hard, someone will still have advanced in harmony before, and if it was so simple, then many people would find out and try to mimic them. I think it's some secret related to Sen's strange hiding ability. He obviously has some secret related to his birth as is common in cultivator stories.
Michael
2023-07-12 05:58:45 +0000 UTCHey Eric, thank you taking time to reply in earnest
Hayden D
2023-07-10 16:26:53 +0000 UTCPeople aren't really supposed to like Lo Meifeng at this point. She IS a wet blanket. And to be fair, it's not like Sen really did anything to EARN that advancement. He had it handed to him by a divine turtle who found Sen interesting enough to help. She could have congratulated him for it, but it would have been tantamount to saying, "Hey, good job on being lucky." As for her competence...the job she's doing now isn't the job she was assigned. She went from her job basically being told to hang back and make sure some sect elder didn't kill him to chasing a veritable ghost across half the kingdom. When she does manage to find him, it's just in time for her to discover that he's going to be actively hunted by a demonic cabal. So, she went from super casual babysitter to full-time bodyguard basically overnight. That isn't the job she was given, but it is the one she's stuck with until help shows up or the threat is eliminated. None of which, incidentally, is really in her wheelhouse. She's making it up as she goes, and Sen does go out of his way to make it harder for her at times. It'd be weird if she wasn't constantly angry, aggressively overprotective, and yelling at him all the time. From her point of view, it's nothing short of miraculous than she hasn't punched anyone in the face yet.
Eric Dontigney
2023-07-08 22:36:34 +0000 UTCAhh yes. Shows you properly got into the story. I have to say, complaining is fun. I also sometimes have to center myself again and delete and rewrite a comment I tried to make. Because complaining for fun's sake, because you like the story is fine. Insulting the author isn't. Always bothers me when comments cross that line. If people hate a story, nobody is forcing them to read it. Good-natured complaining can lead to the most fun arguments though :) I agree, I don't like his minder. But I also understand where shes coming from. If he dies, there's a decent chance Feng ming will kill her as punishment. Its not fair to Sen, but it's also not fair to her. Feng ming underestimated the level of trouble Sen could cause. He expected him to get into some sect trouble at worst. Nothing to worry about. He could've assigned someone stronger, but core cultivators are rare. And Feng ming hasn't really shown to be all that in touch with proper worldly affairs and dangers. He's very bad at estimated what would be reasonable for lower level people. So while I don't like it, it is realistic.
Alex
2023-07-08 21:55:30 +0000 UTCI used sharper language than I needed to with the comment above. I apologize; I should’ve waited a bit and tempered my input.
Hayden D
2023-07-08 19:29:39 +0000 UTCIm sorry, the criticism below turned out to be longer than I expected! I genuinely think you’ve created an amazing story, and im obviously not privy to the plot notes or the grand design, so maybe I’m off base. Just my opinion, but I personally have a couple issues with how Sen’s minder is being handled: 1) she is a Debbie Downer. Sen just had this amazing advancement, which is what prog fantasy is all about, but instead of showing his new power or celebrating, the reader has to endure Sen being berated from an individual who so far has been incompetent at doing her job. 2) Sen’s purpose for wandering is about finding his path through his personal experiences and insights, but now he has to evaluate each action his takes through a filter of how difficult it makes the minder’s job. It feels like her incompetence is now a limiting factor on Sen’s self discovery. Yes, following the main character is hard, but it’s the minders entire purpose and job. All she has contributed is name dropping Feng, which Sen feasibly could do. Why wouldn’t Feng assign someone who can actually stay in the background and protect Sen? Someone who isn’t constantly making an appearance and being a wet blanket about her job that she can’t even perform. Otherwise I’m a sucker for divine turtles and special tribulations, so that was fun! And kudos to your production and getting chapters out for all of us to enjoy!
Hayden D
2023-07-08 19:22:11 +0000 UTCI wonder if Sen’s lack of tribulations in s because his spirit and bod have, until now, always been in balance and his advancement tempered by enlightenment. Maybe cultivators only make the heavens mad when they progress in disharmony?
Elijah Overland
2023-07-08 15:43:17 +0000 UTCMaybe his hiding thingy work on the heaven passively, it would explain why Kho and Feng seem to thing he has limitless potential. also if the divine turtle is a link to the heaven, it would also explain this tribution.
Nathan Camussi
2023-07-08 14:27:12 +0000 UTCDoes body cultivation still improve looks or is that something that tapers off in the early stages? Or is it so gradual that its not noticeable just from this jump in body cultivation?
Lewis
2023-07-08 10:08:51 +0000 UTCThey usually do. Body Cultivators live longer through elevating their Physique i.e. becoming stronger, faster and generally better in every Aspect of the body. Spirit Cultivators are living longer, because of the Qi in their Meridians and cores.
Ekko
2023-07-08 07:19:40 +0000 UTCGenerally speaking pure body cultivators dont. The various refinements body cultivators go through improve their physical attributes, strength, toughness, reflexes non magical senses etc. and dont require much in the way of support. Passive qi absorption and a qi infused diet seem to be sufficient but at the same time they generally have no active qi techniques. Pure spirit cultivators are more typically squishy wizards the qi based techniques can offset that as long as their reserves hold out. Dual path cultivators have the advantages of both but have an opportunity cost in terms of time or resources so generally unless they're a cultivation genius have lower levels of advancement in either path.
Robin Richards
2023-07-08 05:57:51 +0000 UTCDo body cultivators also have longer lifespans like spirit cultivators , or is there a difference ?
The Arcane Emperor
2023-07-08 05:41:16 +0000 UTCMaybe this was explained in book 1, but where do body cultivators store Qi then? Is their body just a natural battery? I had originally thought a core was something all cultivation types had, but it seems that’s specific to spirit cultivators
Derek Walker
2023-07-08 05:05:21 +0000 UTCBody cultivation and spirit cultivation are entirely separate processes. One can be a body cultivator without being a spirit cultivator and vice versa. They can benefit each other, but they don't rely on each other. Most cultivators are just spirit cultivators.
Eric Dontigney
2023-07-08 05:01:41 +0000 UTCNo, I'm not trying to trick anyone. It's not a red herring. If anyone thinks I'm going to answer the tribulation question in the next chapter, I'm not. It's not that kind of question. For Sen, this issue is pretty central to cultivation. He has a lot of questions and a couple of competing ideas about it. One of them is his pet favorite. He's going to have to spend some time wrestling with it and figuring out which, if any, of his ideas are right.
Eric Dontigney
2023-07-08 04:58:47 +0000 UTCSo body cultivation is unrelated to the liquid qi stored in someone’s Dantian? Because he hasn’t filled up his core yet it seems his body cultivation has jumped stages
Derek Walker
2023-07-08 04:55:00 +0000 UTCIt could also be the whole thing about enlightenment, but it feels cheap since it is mentioned in the last paragraph. Are you trying to trick us here?
Rehoboth Okorie
2023-07-08 04:49:41 +0000 UTCHmm, the idea that advancing cultivation levels in both body and soul avoid tribulation is gaining momentum. Maybe the heaves don't hate cultivation, but the lack of balance (between body and soul) that most cultivation brings about?
Rehoboth Okorie
2023-07-08 04:47:54 +0000 UTC