Unintended Cultivator V3: Chapter 43 - Inferno’s Vale, Part 2
Added 2023-07-27 17:18:19 +0000 UTCSen knew that going into the valley was a bad idea. He also knew that Lo Meifeng was going to go down there and throw herself into the fight anyway. She had at least listened to his advice to approach quietly, suppressing her presence as much as she could. Sen was full-on hiding. His only consolation was that, since advancing his body and spirit cultivation, hiding no longer blinded his senses so badly. Granted, they only really functioned the way he was used to in a forty-foot radius, but that was almost enough to give him some breathing room. Sen’s real concern was that he had zero experience with this kind of large-scale fighting and no clue about Lo Meifeng’s experience with it. He was aware of things like battle strategy, but that didn’t make him competent to simply insert himself into a battle. He didn’t have the background to assess the field and make judgment calls. He could just as easily disrupt a carefully planned trap as save lives.
Just as importantly, he was quite sure that there were cultivators in that battle who were peak core formation cultivators. He could probably distract people like that for a little while, but he didn’t like his chances taking them on head-to-head. Not without falling back on a technique that he had no intention of showing off to a thousand people. His only relief was that he was also pretty sure there were no nascent soul cultivators out there. At least, if there were, they weren’t participating directly. If they had been, he doubted that there would be anything left of the valley or much of anything else within ten miles of the valley in any direction. Even having multiple core formation cultivators on the field threatened everything nearby. Sen knew how much damage he could do all by himself and that was before he advanced. He tried to imagine what ten or fifteen people like him, only more powerful, could do to the countryside. Of course, he didn’t plan to start throwing around powerful techniques right out of the gate. Crushing force was all well and good against one opponent or even a handful. When killing ten people wouldn’t even put a dent in the opposition, though, there was little value in draining his qi reserves for a big, showy display of power.
His most immediate concern, however, was their lack of information about where the fight was happening. He’d been able to see where the core of the fighting was happening, but there had a lot of fighting happening away from that main battle. He didn’t want to find himself confronted with a group of hostile cultivators from either side as they made their approach. He also didn’t think that either group was going to react well to them just appearing out of nowhere. If they’d taken a little time to talk out an approach, they might have thought of some way to avoid these kinds of problems, but Lo Meifeng had clearly been in no mood to wait. Instead, they were covering ground as fast as their qinggong techniques would let them. Sen thought it was nothing short of miraculous that no one had seen them yet, but that couldn’t last. The only piece of good luck in the whole mess, as far as Sen was concerned, was that they got to jump in and look like heroes to the fire cultivators when they did stumble across people who were fighting.
Sen had caught the sounds of fighting before Lo Meifeng and grabbed her arm. She dropped her qinggong technique and lifted an eyebrow at him in lieu of speaking. He pointed to his ear and then forward and to the left. Lo Meifeng cocked her head and closed her eyes. After a few seconds, she opened her eyes again and shook her head. Sen leaned in so he could whisper next to her ear at near inaudible levels.
“There’s fighting up ahead. Stay here. I’ll go take a look.”
She scowled at him and mouthed the words, “Why you?”
“You’re kidding, right?” whispered Sen.
“Oh, right,” whispered Lo Meifeng at that same barely perceptible level. “Sorry.”
Sen mouthed the words, “Be right back,” and started moving forward between the sparse trees in a crouch. It didn’t take him long to find the fighting. In this little skirmish, the fire cultivators were clearly outclassed. He couldn’t get close enough to get a good read on everyone’s cultivation levels, but it didn’t take a tactical genius to recognize that four fire cultivators versus ten water cultivators wasn’t going to end well for the fire cultivators. The fire cultivators had managed to erect a small shelter to prevent the water cultivators from just shooting them full of arrows and calling it a day. But the hasty fortification of dirt and what looked like a couple of half-rotted logs wasn’t going to hold up for long. Sen slipped away and went back to Lo Meifeng. He explained in terse, quiet sentences what he’d seen.
“How do you want to handle this?” he asked.
“We kill all of them,” she said, cold fury in her eyes.
“I was hoping for a bit more strategy than that. We could be at this all day. I don’t want to waste qi on side fights.”
Lo Meifeng made a visible effort to calm herself before shaking her head. “I’m too angry and worried to plan anything.”
Sen thought it over. Realistically, he could probably kill them all by himself with nothing but some shadow to give him cover, but Lo Meifeng couldn’t operate in the field of total darkness he preferred. He eyed her.
“How good is your memory?”
“What? It’s fine, I guess. Why?”
“Because I can blanket that whole area in fog. Once I do that, though, you need to be able to remember the terrain and the location of the enemy. Can you do that?”
She glared at him. “Can you?”
“Yes,” he said.
Lo Meifeng was quiet for a moment before she said, “I can remember well enough.”
“You’re sure?”
“I said I can do it,” she growled in a harsh whisper. “Let’s go.”
Sen slid his jian from its scabbard and took the lead. He knew that the water cultivators were mostly focused on the fire cultivator victims, so he worried a little less about stealth until they got close. Then, he started cycling up the combination of fire qi, air qi, and water qi he’d need to make this plan work. He saw Lo Meifeng studying the area where the fight was happening fix a look of grim concentration on her face. He wondered just how much of her claim that she could remember the terrain and enemy locations was truth and how much was bravado. He almost changed his mind and went with the shadow cover plan instead, but that would no doubt just cause a fight he didn’t want to have. So, he started mixing together the right elements to produce what he needed. A few of the water cultivators seemed to hesitate for a moment when he first started, but almost immediately focused on the fire cultivators again when nothing obvious happened.
Sen took more time than Lo Meifeng liked, but when it happened, it happened fast. Over the course of about five seconds, the entire area went from completely clear to being so thick with fog that nothing could be seen more than a foot away. Sen pointed at Lo Meifeng and then in the direction she should go. Then, he pointed at himself and the direction he planned to go. She gave him one nod and then vanished into the fog. Sen started walking toward the first of water cultivators he was going to target. The fog didn’t give him the kind of local omniscience he enjoyed when using shadow, but it did offer general locations of people. He could hear the water cultivators calling out to each other, their voices oddly muffled and distorted by the fog. He felt a couple of them try to use their qi to manipulate the fog, but their attempts shattered against his control. Foundation formation, at best, he thought. Sen moved through the enemies like a lethal ghost. Three of them were dead when he heard someone start screaming about wraiths and devils in the fog. Sen knew that was going to cause problems. Two of the water cultivators near him had managed to find each other in the fog and were standing so close that they looked like one person in his senses. They started hurling water blades and compressed balls of water in every direction.
After dodging three compressed water balls and two water blades, he decided to forego subtlety in the name of efficiency. He cycled up some lighting and sent a bolt of it at the huddled pair. One went down immediately, but it seemed they had taken the brunt of the strike. Almost immediately, a blade of water shot toward him from the other water cultivator. Sen almost broke the technique, before he thought better of it and dropped to the ground. The blade passed through the air over him. Sen sent another bolt of lightning at the remaining water cultivator. When they toppled over, Sen stood and walked over to them. He thought they were probably both dead, but he wasn’t comfortable with that kind of probably scenarios. He found the two cultivators still smoking with weird discolorations all through their undamaged skin. He slid his jian into their hearts, one after the other. They had both already been dead.
For a moment, Sen just looked at them. He knew that age was largely an illusion for cultivators, but they barely looked older than he did. One had been a young man with curly dark hair. There was still an expression on his face. He looked confused and afraid. I did that to him, thought Sen, and I don’t even know why. Was the fact that he was just on the wrong side of the fight a good enough reason for me to kill him? Sen thought he’d made his accommodations with the necessity of killing, but these deaths struck him as especially pointless and without merit. It didn’t change anything, though. He shook off the discomfort as best as he could and focused on the information he was getting from the fog he was maintaining. He'd been following Lo Meifeng’s progress in the back of his mind. She’d gotten three of the five on her side but had either forgotten the locations of the other two or otherwise gotten disoriented. Sighing to himself, Sen closed the distance. The first one died without ever seeing him. The last of the water cultivators had found a tree and backed up against it. When Sen materialized out of the fog, she stared at him with naked terror on her face. She held a trembling dao in her hand and pointed it at him.
“Who are you? Why are you doing this?” she asked.
Sen regarded her for a moment and asked, “Why were you?”
“They’re my enemies.”
“Are they? What did they do to you?”
“They attacked my sect.”
“I asked what they did to you,” said Sen.
The woman opened her mouth, but no words came out.
Sen nodded. “That’s what I thought.”
The woman slashed at him only to stare in shocked horror as he caught the blade and brought it to a dead stop with his bare hand. He pulled the sword away from her numb fingers and tossed it aside. He held out a hand.
“Storage ring.”
She stared at him like he was the end of all things. After a moment, she lowered her eyes and pulled a ring off her finger. She dropped it onto his palm. Sen had become so adept with the storage treasures that it took him less than a second to access the ring and assess its contents. Satisfied that were no weapons in it, he tossed the ring back to her. Then, he lifted his jian and pointed with it.
“There isn’t anyone from either side in that direction. I suggest you get lost and disoriented for the next day or two, then find your way back to wherever you came from.”
“I don’t understand. Why spare me?”
Sen didn’t have a good answer for her or himself. Try as he might, he just couldn’t shake the confused and frightened look that had been on the dead kid’s face. Maybe he just didn’t want to see that look or one like it on someone else’s face so soon. He honestly didn’t know. Lacking solid truth to lean on, he made something up.
“I don’t think you’re evil, just foolish. This is your opportunity to fix that.”
“Thank you,” she whispered.
“One last thing,” said Sen, staring at her until she met his eyes again. “Do not let me see you on this battlefield again. Now go.”
The woman ran off in the direction he’d pointed.
“You know she’s the enemy, right?” said Lo Meifeng from behind him.
“She’s not my enemy. She was willing to leave.”
“You realize that she’s probably going to run right back to her people. Odds are that we’ll be fighting her again in few hours.”
“I don’t think we will.”
“If we do.”
“If we do, then she will be my enemy, and I will cut her down without a second thought.”
Lo Meifeng made a noncommittal noise. “I think I see what you meant, now.”
“About?”
“Balance being a work in progress for you.”
“Yeah,” said Sen in a tired voice. “Come on, let’s go say hello to the fire cultivators.”
Sen cleared the fog away with a brief application of qi. Then, they started walking toward the makeshift fortification. The fire cultivators, who had seen the fog come out of nowhere, and then heard the screaming and fighting, peeked out to get a look at their saviors. When they saw the bodies of the water cultivators scattered across the area, they stood up and stared in wonder at Sen and Lo Meifeng.
“Who are you?” asked one of the fire cultivators.
Sen stared at the one who'd asked the question. Their face was so covered in blood that Sen couldn't tell if they were a man or woman. After that, Sen mostly ignored the conversation as Lo Meifeng immediately started asking about her brother. He didn’t start paying attention again until someone asked about him.
“Okay, but who is he?”
Sen looked over at them and went to answer, but Lo Meifeng answered for him. “Him? That’s Judgment’s Gale.”
Sen gave Lo Meifeng a death glared she ignored and said, “Oh, thank you so much for that, your highness.”
Comments
LOL
Eric Dontigney
2023-08-08 16:40:48 +0000 UTC“How do you want to handle this?” he asked. “We kill all of them,” she said, cold fury in her eyes. "Right! You kill the Water cultivators and I'll kill the fire cultivators and then join you on the slaughter in a pincer attack." Lo Meifeng blinked in sudden confusion "No! That's.." "Buh buh buh!" Sen interrupted. "I know they say to fight fire with fire but that doesn't work as well as you'd think. There is a city that could support my case if anyone had survived. Alright lets do this! LEEERROOYYYY!"
Valderan
2023-08-08 04:28:15 +0000 UTCA few things to keep in mind is that neither of them expected to walk into a full-scale battle. Lo Meifeng might have been cagey about why she wanted to go there, but she wasn't lying about it being out of the way and a place where people studied fire qi. They've also been on the road for a while without any major problems. So, neither of them were as paranoid as they might otherwise have been. So, here are two people wandering up to a valley where they expect to find a quiet, cozy little spot to hole up in for a while where nothing exciting is going to happen. Lo Meifeng is probably expecting a fraught reunion with her, but is clearly hoping to patch things up. BANG! Battle! Like most people confronted with an clear and present threat to the safety of a family member, Lo Meifeng stopped thinking rationally immediately. Sen, having enjoyed weeks of relative leisure, isn't really thinking at all. He assumed they were going to wait it out. So, when Lo Meifeng made it clear that she was going down there to fight, Sen didn't really think about it through the paranoid lens he might have used two months earlier. Here's the part that I didn't highlight, but is true nonetheless. There are no non-combatants on a battlefield like that. Once they went down into that valley, they were going to end up in a fight with someone. At that point, Sen had to pick a side. So, reluctantly, he picked the side his friend/companion had already picked. That doesn't mean he's happy about it. It also doens't mean that he isn't going to have a LOT to say to Lo Meifeng about it afterwards. Once he was in the fight, though, he was stuck unless he was willing to simply abandon Lo Meifeng to her fate. And, that's not something he does lightly.
Eric Dontigney
2023-07-28 01:01:15 +0000 UTCI'm kind of irritated by the decisions that have been made in the last couple of chapters. Meifeng seems to be making exactly the same sorts of poor decisions that she continually got on Shen's case about, and Shen is willing to kill people without confirming that they did something he considered death-worthy. I can understand how these could be in character, Meifeng seems like she's significantly less reasonable when people she is attached to are under attack, and Sen is struggling between keeping to his moral code and abandoning one of the only people he could consider a friend; it just seemed to go against how they've acted previously before I reflected on it for a while. The only thing that I can't think of a reason for is the fact that when Sen spares the girl in the chapter he acts as though her sect being attacked isn't a good reason to fight, while he's killing people based on his friend's sect that she hasn't interacted with in around a century being attacked. It seems surprisingly hypocritical for him, given that he's generally made a point to reflect over his reasons for his actions before and after them. Your work has overall been high quality in regards to internal consistency, so I'm unsure if I'm missing something or if it's going to be brought up in the next couple of chapters That said, thanks for the chapter. I apologize if this comes off as overly critical, I'm not super sure when a detail is enhances the literary analysis vs when it comes off as disparaging. If you do find any of it insulting, please tell me so I'll be able to improve on it in the future
Zivlanir
2023-07-27 23:16:13 +0000 UTC😂
Eric Dontigney
2023-07-27 20:45:23 +0000 UTCHis sparing is a bit more egalitarian than that. He spared the bandit guy and all his people when he was traveling with Bigan. He arguably spared Bigan's uncle, who Sen was definitely angry enough to kill. He spared the rapist's father. He even spared Cheng Bojing's lackeys when he first ran into the Soaring Skies people on the road. He didn't kill the guys on beach when they bothered him and insulted Lifen. In terms of sparing people just because, he did it once after the fight in Grandmother Lu's shop all the way back in volume 1 and here. He spared the girl at the fight at the Silver Crane because he wanted to send a message back to the sect. He explained why he spared the merchant woman, but I could gender swap her into a guy easily enough. I thought it was implied that he wasn't really 100% on-board with killing the people fighting with the fire cultivators, but I could throw in a line or two where he justifies it to himself.
Eric Dontigney
2023-07-27 20:37:48 +0000 UTCSlight constructive criticism the one predictable aspect of an otherwise unpredictable story is a trend with each skirmish Sen runs into some opposition, fights or kills the majority of them, spares a random woman(s), tells them to leave or stay out of it the one exception that comes to mind is Wu Gang the one guy spared. the sparing does open up a literary opportunity for dialogue when he is randomly attacked/attacking, but I feel an in universe explanation on why he spares them in particular is needed, other then sparing them just because they are women as it currently is coming off as, even if he simply states he doesn't like killing women it would provide an explanation going forward for all future sparing's again like how Wu Gang had an explanation. if its just happenstance, varying the type of people spared would remove some of the predictability of the trend, couples, guys, spirit beasts, unknown genders
b
2023-07-27 19:56:55 +0000 UTCWho? Him? That’s just Your friendly, local Judgements Gale.
Andrew Potter
2023-07-27 19:41:50 +0000 UTCwas there lack of information --> was their lack of information Meifeng and grabbed her arm. --> Meifeng and grabbed his arm. I don’t to --> I don’t want to bodies of the water cultivator --> bodies of the water cultivators
A B
2023-07-27 18:50:57 +0000 UTCYou can binge watch another series then come back in a few days with a like 10 chapters in a row, that’s what I’m doing
Julien
2023-07-27 18:33:02 +0000 UTCI need to fast forward a month so I can gorge on content.
Derrick McDowell
2023-07-27 17:38:55 +0000 UTCI mean quid pro quo, she got dragged into his shit and she didn't whine about it (to much). And if you're gonna say "It's here job", as far as we know here job was mostly stalking and only in emergencies help out a bit and not playing a bodyguard, fighting of and fleeing from tons of demonic cultivators and getting caught by a cult.
Ekko
2023-07-27 17:38:46 +0000 UTCMaybe it will come later, but it seems like he should be absolutely pissed at Lo Meifeng for dragging him into this.
Derek Walker
2023-07-27 17:27:20 +0000 UTCLoved that ending 😂
Savitr
2023-07-27 17:21:28 +0000 UTC