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Unintended Cultivator V4: Chapter 61 – Back to Business

“I’m just saying that you could have sent a message,” said Lo Meifeng.

Sen held his tongue for three seconds, making sure he wasn’t about to make things worse, before he answered. “And what should I have said in the message?”

“That you hadn’t been kidnapped. That you were fine. That you were,” Lo Meifeng trailed off.

“Yeah,” said Sen, “that was the part that tripped me up. I wasn’t going to tell you what I was really doing in a message than anyone could intercept. And realistically, after five days, would it have really changed anything? I get what you’re saying. I should have let you all know that I was okay. I knew you were going to worry. I am sorry about that part. But I also know you. You would never have just accepted some vague assurance that I wasn’t under duress. And, frankly, it wasn’t anyone else’s business.”

“I know you haven’t figured this part out yet,” said Lo Meifeng with an unusual chill in her voice, “but every damn thing you do is our business.”

“No, it isn’t.”

“It is because we’re the ones it’s most likely to blow back on. Every time you pick a fight with a sect, or take sides in some political situation, or decide to bed the nascent soul matriarch of the biggest sect in the city, it puts us in the line of fire. By the way, I hope you haven’t deluded yourself into thinking there won’t be any fallout from the last one.”

“What? Why would there be?”

“You’re not that stupid. Naïve sometimes, but not stupid. Not unless you’ve decided to be. Her list of would-be suitors and lovers could stretch from here to the ocean. So, naturally, you wander into the situation, ignore the existence of all of those people who would now gladly murder you, and spend most of week locked in a bedroom with her. And you think nothing is going to come of that?”

“It’s not like I married her,” said Sen, feeling a little defensive.

“A fact that I’m certain calls for offerings to at least one god or goddess that has more wisdom than you. Also, not really relevant. What is relevant is that, as usual, you’ve made enemies you won’t know until they decide to act.”

At that, Sen’s patience ran out. He stood up from the chair he’d been sitting in for his lecture.

“Enough! I understand that you’re angry with me. But I am not going to apologize for the time I took for myself. Two years. Not even two years. That’s what I have left at the rate we’re going. So, if I decided that I could take a handful of those days and forget about the fact that I’m dying, forget about all of the killing, forget about stupid mortal political situations, I will not let you try to make me feel ashamed about that. You don’t have the right. You can complain at me all you want about how badly I failed at communicating what was going on. I have that coming. You don’t get to judge how I choose to spend what little time I have left.”

Lo Meifeng’s face had gone ashen beneath Sen’s abrupt tirade. Sen turned and started to leave the room.

“Where are you going?” she asked in a weak voice.

Sen looked over his shoulder at her. “To do what everyone seemingly wants me to do. I’m getting back to business as usual. I still have a nascent soul cultivator to murder.”

“Sen,” said Lo Meifeng, “that isn’t what I meant.”

“Isn’t it?” asked Sen, before he left the room.

***

While Sen was at the house at times over the next few days, he wasn’t present in any meaningful way. When he was there, he kept himself locked away in a room that he was using as a makeshift bedroom and alchemy laboratory, only occasionally coming out to eat something. When he wasn’t sleeping or working on alchemical projects that he refused to discuss with anyone, he was gone. When the others offered to go with him, he refused them all with a flat expression and said that they couldn’t go where he was going. It was true, as far as it went. Only Sen could hide from the normally all-seeing spiritual sense of a nascent soul cultivator, but he could tell that his coldness and withdrawal from the group had them all worried. Yet, he didn’t see another way.

If he really was going to have go and find Fu Ruolan, that was a danger he refused to drag others into. It was one thing to risk himself on a quest to find a mad cultivator when he was already dying. It was something else entirely to ask people who weren’t dying to face a situation where their deaths weren’t just possible, but probable. Beyond that, he had taken Falling Leaf with him once before where his death had almost occurred. It had changed her. He refused to take her with him when his death was a near certainty. Sen refused to have that be her final memory of him. He also knew that there was an element of cowardice in it. He didn’t have it in him to watch her die. It would be too much. It would break him. So, when he left the city, he planned on leaving it by himself.

Still, leaving by himself didn’t mean that he had to leave them all in a terrible situation. He could resolve some of the problems and dangers he’d created for them in the city before he did. To that end, he’d been plotting Tong Guanting’s entry into his next incarnation. The cultivator criminal had been busy during Sen’s brief break. He’d consolidated what was left of his men into one location. Sen assumed it was meant as either a threat or a lure, but that wasn’t the building that interested him. The building that Sen was interested in was the one that Tong Guanting had tried to keep hidden. It had taken a while to find it. The nascent soul cultivator had hired someone to put up misdirection formations. They didn’t hide the building so much as make people want to focus their attention on other nearby places. Sen had also identified a number of nasty defensive formations.

Whoever Tong Guanting had found for the work had been good, but Sen had spent countless hours working with formation with his life and the lives of others in the balance. It had propelled his knowledge in ways that only life-or-death scenarios can. It took a little mental effort, but he figured out how he’d bypass those formations one by one without setting them off. That was important. He needed those formation to look like they were still active and working properly until he was ready for them to alert Tong Guanting that something was wrong. Sen couldn’t be entirely sure that the building contained the remains of the Shadow Eagle Talon Syndicate’s fortunes, but all the precautions suggested that’s what it meant. He’d also spent more than a little time tracking Tong Guanting’s movements. Sen wanted at least a general sense of where the man usually was at any given time, so he could make his move at the most opportune moment.

For all the complaining that the others had done about his little vacation, Sen had the sneaking suspicion that it was ultimately going to benefit this particular project. Sen understood just how hard it was to maintain constant vigilance. If he’d attempted what he was planning a week earlier, it might have failed. He suspected that everyone would have been too vigilant. With Sen’s reappearance in the city, he expected that everyone in Tong Guanting’s employ had been very vigilant for a couple of days, yet Sen hadn’t acted. He was able to very nearly watch the apathy start to set in. Guards paid less attention. Patrols happened less frequently. In the end, too much time had passed since the last attack. He imagined that they were all thinking that Sen had finally gotten tired of persecuting their entire organization.

He supposed they were even right about that in some ways. If they were just a gang of formation foundation cultivators and core cultivators, he probably would have just tracked down their leadership from the get-go and killed them. A power struggle would have taken place and the group might have simply fallen apart from the internal strife. Even if it didn’t, it would have been a long time before they were as organized and functional as they had been. Sen hadn’t spared anyone and the ranks of the Shadow Eagle Talon Syndicate had dropped precipitously. Just as importantly, unlike a regular gang, those people were more difficult to replace. The number of cultivators looking to become full-time criminals was exceedingly low. Cultivators were, as a rule, spoiled for options that didn’t involve crime if they spent even a little time looking.

In the end, though, Tong Guanting was simply too much of a danger for Sen to leave the man alive behind him. That was especially true if he planned to leave Falling Leaf, Lo Meifeng, and Shi Ping behind when he left. Tong Guanting was exactly the sort of man to take out his anger on the people he could reach. As long as Sen was in the city, being visible and interesting, the other nascent soul cultivators would keep a close watch on Tong Guanting. Once Sen left, he suspected that their interest would swiftly wane. That is when the man would strike out at the people Sen cared about. Since Sen couldn’t be sure that they’d leave the city to protect themselves, he’d just have to take a little some preventative measures.

Still, he didn’t rush things. He took his time. He watched. He waited. He developed countermeasures to things he suspected that Tong Guanting might try. Most importantly of all, he worked on the alchemical surprises he was cooking up just for the nascent soul cultivator. It turned that making things that hurt people was infinitely easier than making things that helped them. Still, Sen didn’t just need things that could hurt a person. He needed something that could hurt a nascent soul cultivator. So, he worked and refined his elixirs until he was almost afraid to get near his own creations. It was only when he’d perfected the deadly little gifts that Sen decided it was time to make the final move in his war on Tong Guanting.

Comments

I don't care. Yes everything he does has consequences for them, but that's not his fault. They all chose to follow him. They could just leave. They lost the right to demand that he lives his whole life for them instead of for himself when they chose to stay. Even his minder could leave, he could make up an excuse to Feng ming. Ask for him to leave her alone. Falling leaf wants to follow him and Shi ping also chose to stay. Besides, people are already hating him even without this. A few more angry core formation enemies aren't an issue. And let's not forget that he made an ally too. People already hate him and he's dying, I don't blame him for wanting to do something fun for a change Choices. They all chose to be be there. And yet they're constantly treating him like a little kid, getting mad at him whenever he wants a tiny bit of privacy and make his own choices. They could just leave.

Alex

“It’s not like I married her,” said Sen, feeling a little defensive.” ‘At that, Sen’s patience ran out. He stood up from the chair he’d been sitting in for his lecture. “Enough! I understand that you’re angry with me.’ I liked the chapter’s intention a lot, the pressure slightly showing the cracks in Sen’s outward persona and reminding us how young he is great character development for me. Both the above lines though felt a bit clunky and surprising to the reader. Even if Sen is acting young, it should still fit within our mental model of him. Sometimes the exposition around his emotional outbursts is so sparse that it blindsides us. On the flip side, the quality of what you write for the speed you write is incredible. When you get an editor before publishing, you can fix it in post!

John O'Connor

I think most people are just not used to actually realistic behavior in fleshed out characters. Kind of how if you play the actual sound a gun with a silencer makes in a movie, most people with think it's the wrong sound.

ScarletIce

Wow, I did not expect this chapter to be quite so controversial. I usually don't weigh in except to clarify details, but I'm going to make an exception this time. One of the recurring objections I see is that Sen isn't consistent or that he's not acting on insights he's had in the past. Real people aren't consistent. A normally nice and kind person can lash out at people if they get too hungry. Not getting enough sleep can make people less decisive or more prone to snap judgments. What is on the morning news can literally change someone's outlook for the rest of the day. People routinely fail to act on their insights. Change takes a concerted effort, and people fail to change all the time, despite their best intentions. How many people resolve to lose weight or be less selfish or live life to the fullest, only to fall back into their old ways within a few weeks? People under pressure make irrational decisions, often to their own detriment, often knowing deep down that it's an irrational, self-harming choice. This isn't exclusive to any one group of people. It applies universally. People are also victims of momentum and habit formation. Sen has basically been in an emotional, spiritual, and physical pressure cooker for more than year. It's given him a lot of time to form habits that aren't necessarily to his benefit, even if the heart demon that drove the creation of many of them is gone. People rationalize their choices, ESPECIALLY the stupid, irrational, self-harming choices. When they get pushback, they tend to cast the people pushing back at them in the role of villain, right or wrong. Even if they do eventually recognize that fact, it's no guarantee that it will generate lasting change. Sen is also on a literal deadline. The most profound kind of pressure a person can be under. Expecting someone to behave consistently and rationally under those conditions is, in my opinion, a bit unrealistic. There's also Sen's core personality to consider. At his core, Sen is a loner street kid. He never wanted an entourage, fame, or responsibility for anything beyond himself. And, like so many people, his unconscious efforts to sabotage the things he doesn't want backfire on him as often as they succeed. He can be a selfish dick, like almost everyone. For all that, though, he isn't heartless or evil. He does care about the people around him to varying degrees. He gets into the situations he does as often as not because he won't just walk away...even when that's the best choice for him...even when he doesn't necessarily owe the people in question his support. He does have a sense of justice and will act on it. And the end result of that is a flawed, messy, complicated character.

Eric Dontigney

She’s definitely right here and Sen is being a dick. They are all his responsibility and everything he does endangers them, risking their lives. Especially now considering everything they are involved in. He’s just trying to blind himself to the obvious. Lo Meifeng should’ve had falling leaf say this instead so Sen understands

Derek Walker

I get Meifeng in this one. Sen seems to be childish here. He really should understand at this point that Meifeng isn’t just doing a job but is genuinely a friend. And I can’t rationalize this one because no heart demon. He made a bad call sleeping with the matriarch person and Meifeng maybe should not have called him out but she was not wrong.

Rehoboth Okorie

It seemed like Sen was planning on having Lo Meifeng kill the last members of the Choi family before he went off with the matriarch. Did he forget about that? Will he only remember on the day of the wedding, thus forcing him into the standard trope of crashing it? Will Yu Ming even want his help anymore?

Trasen56

That was her job when it was supposedly the simple matter of a late core cultivator babysitting a foundation formation cultivator. But now, she's watching over an early core cultivator capable of wholesale slaughtering late core cultivators by the score and winning battles of will with nascient soul cultivators. She simply isn't powerful enough to adequately protect him in a fight from something capable of winning against Sen. The only practical way for her to have his back is by trying to prevent or reduce these confrontations before they happen. And Sen routinely makes doing that a nightmare.

ScarletIce

I'm reasonably certain that Auntie Caihong has taught him poisons, so he knows how to recognize them and make antidotes. But also just so he can make them for situations like this one, were he has to kill someone for his safety. Someone like her definitely knows that raw violence doesn't always work and even if you want to avoid danger, danger finds you. So it would be weird of she didn't teach him anything about poisons. Hell I'm reasonably certain that some of his alchemical concotion done wrong can be highly toxic, so he had to learn what made the stuff that should heal poisonous.

Ekko

Lo Meifeng has put Shi Ping in his place a few chapters back for not knowing it, only to find herself in the same situation just a few weeks later. From what I understand, her job was to have Sen's back when he does his Judgement Gale thing and report back on his shenanigans. While I understand that she can't accompany Sen when he is hiding, I don't think that's an excuse that Feng Ming will like. In this capital city arc, so far she's been more like a servant or attendant rather than his guardian. I think I will be glad for her to lose screentime.

Cperkenling

Really enjoying the story! I'm not sure if more elaboration on what exactly Sen made and it's effects will be explained when it's actually used on Tong. But I feel that it's honestly a little odd that Sen would be able to actually create something strong enough to assassinate a nascent soul cultivator with any amount of success. I know Sen is basically "Alchemy's Altar Boy" at this point in his abilities. But both the materials needed and the techniques seem like things Sen wouldn't really know yet in his cultivation experience. And also wouldn't have been taught to him by auntie Caihong in his time in the mountain because why the hell would Sen need to learn how to assassinate nascent souls? Sen also feels oddly assured/confident compared to how he normally sees challenges and not weighing just how dangerous Nascents are according to the power scale you've built. Even his internal monologues he doesn't even question that this might be hard. If I missed anything that would answer these points in the story please tell me. Im overall really loving this book but these questions have been burning in my mind since the plot to murder Tong was brought up.

mark harrell


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