Chapter 26 Update
Added 2023-01-14 01:16:49 +0000 UTCThere's been some slight changes to Chapter 26 after misstep was pointed out to me, revising the section just before the ending paragraph. I'll keep an eye out for that kind of mistake in the future.
E.E.
Comments
I can see why it would be better to just cut it out entirely rather than leave it to be a problem for publishing. Still sad at the loss of that scene though… it was so smooth .-.
Nocturne
2023-01-20 11:58:01 +0000 UTCI think the rewrite was wise. The first version was very well-written, but it's too skeevy to have the concern of brainfuckery before a sex scene.
Michael Meikle
2023-01-20 05:46:27 +0000 UTC
